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3/12/2002 c1 BonnieBaybee34
I still need major help with my Jimmy fic, and I'm getting obsessed, so when I read this I couldn't help but think of him. Even though the whole "incident" happened in his beloved Porshe Spyder.
1/17/2002 c1 13Azaezel Coerrigan
I think it is interesting that you write a lkot about blood... this is only the second thing I have read with blood..., but I also gathered from your summaries. Interesting. Good imagery. Sad poem.

~Azaezel~
1/3/2002 c1 1Bitterscarlet
OKay the closing is brilliant: 'The other side of beauty'...sigh...that's just great is all I can say. My only niggle is you forgot to spell check! It kind of detracts from the impact of the poem which is a pity as it's so well written.
12/30/2001 c1 25slantedseven
hi. you reviewed one of my poems (for trip) and I thought it was funny that you have trip in your nickname. ha ha.

Anyway, loved the imagery in this. You can really see the poor guy lying there, can't you? So much for materialism.

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