
5/8/2006 c1 squidgilator
I really, really liked it. A few of the rhymes sounded a bit forced, but otherwise it was fantastic.
I really, really liked it. A few of the rhymes sounded a bit forced, but otherwise it was fantastic.
12/10/2003 c1
22Sunsong
I like it. Especially the line about the choo-choo trains. But, imaginary? Not to me. I still believe that, somehow, even if in another dimension, such "fairie-stories" are *real*.

I like it. Especially the line about the choo-choo trains. But, imaginary? Not to me. I still believe that, somehow, even if in another dimension, such "fairie-stories" are *real*.
9/18/2003 c1
30The B.A.T
Aww... that was cute. Pretty cool poem. It's amazing how vast a child's imagination can be. Oh, how I yearn for those days long past. I liked this a lot. It was refreshing.
-Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman

Aww... that was cute. Pretty cool poem. It's amazing how vast a child's imagination can be. Oh, how I yearn for those days long past. I liked this a lot. It was refreshing.
-Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman
1/29/2003 c1 Winter's Roar
WOW! That was awesome, you spoke of and described everything i used to dream of! I LOVED that last stanza, oh and sailing down the sewer and old ginger sam, you have such a way with words! I love this poem, how long did it take you to think this all up? Anyways, hats off to you on a fabulous poem! more soon pls!
~ winter
WOW! That was awesome, you spoke of and described everything i used to dream of! I LOVED that last stanza, oh and sailing down the sewer and old ginger sam, you have such a way with words! I love this poem, how long did it take you to think this all up? Anyways, hats off to you on a fabulous poem! more soon pls!
~ winter
1/3/2003 c1
9Aradia Madrea-Nox
Wow! *sniff* I really liked that, it brought back a lot of good memories... I wish I could write happy poetry like that! Oh, well. I'll just rant about how good yours is instead. I really liked it, please write more!
~*~Kiayla~*~

Wow! *sniff* I really liked that, it brought back a lot of good memories... I wish I could write happy poetry like that! Oh, well. I'll just rant about how good yours is instead. I really liked it, please write more!
~*~Kiayla~*~
9/16/2002 c1
2Xehirut
O_O... those are some... interesting for-thoughts before dreams...My dreams are usually odder than people named Sam offering Christmas-Ham... ^_^..
I like this piece. ( Oh and thanks for reviewing The Journey... more writing is coming soon. )
Xehirut.

O_O... those are some... interesting for-thoughts before dreams...My dreams are usually odder than people named Sam offering Christmas-Ham... ^_^..
I like this piece. ( Oh and thanks for reviewing The Journey... more writing is coming soon. )
Xehirut.
4/24/2002 c1
2Ainaeriniel de Mirkwood
you wrote everything I saw when I was a child.. well, today I see it yet.
Never forget the little and greatest dreams...
Ainaeriniel.

you wrote everything I saw when I was a child.. well, today I see it yet.
Never forget the little and greatest dreams...
Ainaeriniel.
3/27/2002 c1 ravengirl
very good.
like it allot
very good.
like it allot
3/22/2002 c1 Pippin3791
I like it...it's rather good
I like it...it's rather good