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5/8/2006 c1 squidgilator
I really, really liked it. A few of the rhymes sounded a bit forced, but otherwise it was fantastic.
3/27/2005 c1 6Double Entendre
Beautiful. It reminds me of my childhood... Very nice.
12/10/2003 c1 22Sunsong
I like it. Especially the line about the choo-choo trains. But, imaginary? Not to me. I still believe that, somehow, even if in another dimension, such "fairie-stories" are *real*.
9/18/2003 c1 30The B.A.T
Aww... that was cute. Pretty cool poem. It's amazing how vast a child's imagination can be. Oh, how I yearn for those days long past. I liked this a lot. It was refreshing.

-Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman
1/29/2003 c1 Winter's Roar
WOW! That was awesome, you spoke of and described everything i used to dream of! I LOVED that last stanza, oh and sailing down the sewer and old ginger sam, you have such a way with words! I love this poem, how long did it take you to think this all up? Anyways, hats off to you on a fabulous poem! more soon pls!

~ winter
1/3/2003 c1 9Aradia Madrea-Nox
Wow! *sniff* I really liked that, it brought back a lot of good memories... I wish I could write happy poetry like that! Oh, well. I'll just rant about how good yours is instead. I really liked it, please write more!

~*~Kiayla~*~
9/16/2002 c1 2Xehirut
O_O... those are some... interesting for-thoughts before dreams...My dreams are usually odder than people named Sam offering Christmas-Ham... ^_^..

I like this piece. ( Oh and thanks for reviewing The Journey... more writing is coming soon. )

Xehirut.
4/27/2002 c1 8Ephemeral Dreams
cool! this is a pretty funny poem, hope u write more!

~ElVeNdEsTiNy
4/24/2002 c1 2Ainaeriniel de Mirkwood
you wrote everything I saw when I was a child.. well, today I see it yet.

Never forget the little and greatest dreams...

Ainaeriniel.
3/27/2002 c1 ravengirl
very good.

like it allot
3/22/2002 c1 Pippin3791
I like it...it's rather good
12/26/2001 c1 Emily M. Hanson
Very nice. :)

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