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11/1/2012 c1 Kkid1134
Hope this is just the start of more to come
Enjoyed it, good reading, good plot
7/15/2006 c1 1sulkahlee
Good action but you must have paragraphs to make it easier to read.
10/8/2005 c1 1almostinsane
Great story!
8/3/2000 c1 T. Cummins
I liked the premise. In general the writing was pretty good. I'd like to see

some paragraphs added but all in all nice job.
7/29/2000 c1 Brayton
Awsome story...nice plot...its really cool i would like to see more
4/11/2000 c1 LT TRAINR
TEEHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
4/11/2000 c1 Pip
Awesome! Very good story.
4/11/2000 c1 Mickey Maor
Nice idea, however stupid the story came out.

the tactics were redicules, faced with an enemy like that all officers would be familiar with the basic rules of what they'd do.

the sensible tactic would be to keep some of the fighters with the station and send the rest of them to join the corvetes. All this assuming the enemy was so stupid not to come in as fast and as close as possible.

Another point, the Spartens like the Romans didn't belive in "Victory at any cost" but simply that fighting was an honorable thing to do and it shouldn't matter to the soldiers loved ones if he died on the batlefield since he died with honor.

One last thing a race which is known to comitt atrocieties would either be already at war with all signers of the "Accords of Gethdros V" or it would be the same kind of empty treaties that have been signed so often in the past.
4/11/2000 c1 H.A.T
pretty nice. Good details but a little bit confusinh
4/11/2000 c1 Nerefir
Please put this into paragraph form. That is my main complaint about this story, because I've seen it and put up with it so often.
4/11/2000 c1 Stardust
Cool story
4/11/2000 c1 Emerice Tiyrell
Very good there could be a little more cursing though hehehehehe
4/11/2000 c1 Christina Miller
Enjoyed it very much, although I think it needs some paragraphs.

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