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1/30/2002 c1 84Jaclyn
I love the second verse, and the line about the shell...
1/17/2002 c1 13Azaezel Coerrigan
This one is interesting. I like poems about fear... I suppose thats a little twisted... but anyways... :o) I Like the lasttwo lines, although it seems like a little bit of a contradiction... did you do that on purpose? Good work!

~azaezel~
1/4/2002 c1 12quiller
i'm impressed! *smiles*
1/4/2002 c1 Julie Bihn
It flowed nicely.

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