for Sour Apples3/24/2004 c1 
8Antimony VI Sulphide
i like it. it's sour, like those apples. and it's short, but you take a whole lot in anyways.
8Antimony VI Sulphidei like it. it's sour, like those apples. and it's short, but you take a whole lot in anyways.
10/3/2003 c1 1Lauren Magnarelli
I know nothing about wrestling, yet it was still pretty good. I didnt think it was extremely funny like the other people, but I like your sense of humor. I liked how your characterization came very easily, and most of it through speech. it was very good. see ya.
Lauren:)
1Lauren MagnarelliI know nothing about wrestling, yet it was still pretty good. I didnt think it was extremely funny like the other people, but I like your sense of humor. I liked how your characterization came very easily, and most of it through speech. it was very good. see ya.
Lauren:)
3/3/2001 c1 2Lotuss Tears
lmao that was great, a good reminder to those who think that life can't get any worse well it usually does lol
2Lotuss Tearslmao that was great, a good reminder to those who think that life can't get any worse well it usually does lol
8/10/2000 c1 Krista Peters
this one is great, nice writing, i love your since of humor
this one is great, nice writing, i love your since of humor