for The Pen and the Sword2/8/2007 c1 
10winteria
nice concept. very nice, i must say. the longer this fict, i think the better it will be :D
i think you can expand more ideas from this & add more details !
anyways. i love this. pens always pwn x3
` MCHLV; 3 felia.
10winterianice concept. very nice, i must say. the longer this fict, i think the better it will be :D
i think you can expand more ideas from this & add more details !
anyways. i love this. pens always pwn x3
` MCHLV; 3 felia.
3/10/2003 c1 MelodyReiterLee
this is great. It's so true.
this is great. It's so true.
8/29/2002 c1 Rohali
neat. i like the way you describe the sword's strengths rather than just stating why the pen is mightier
neat. i like the way you describe the sword's strengths rather than just stating why the pen is mightier
8/12/2002 c1 1minty fresh socks
Ah, yes, the truth! It's good, especially now, to hear it... The pen can heal and hurt, often at the same time. We must wield it carefully.
1minty fresh socksAh, yes, the truth! It's good, especially now, to hear it... The pen can heal and hurt, often at the same time. We must wield it carefully.
8/1/2002 c1 29Katterree Fengari
sweet! ...yes..you have to be very skilled to use the pen to its full extent...O.O
29Katterree Fengarisweet! ...yes..you have to be very skilled to use the pen to its full extent...O.O
6/1/2002 c1 6Escape Velocity
This is really, really good and very true. The way you've chosen to write it is very original and brings out the strong message. This is very, very good.
6Escape VelocityThis is really, really good and very true. The way you've chosen to write it is very original and brings out the strong message. This is very, very good.
5/3/2002 c1 28Le Chat Noir
Well, I have to agree with this, of course, but I guess that in my twisted mind, well, that was the first idea I got after reading this: the sword just might be the only cure for the unhealable wounds your pen may inflige. Hey. Yes, yes, I know, that's falling into melodrama, the darn, awful melodrama. Anyways, this is very, very good indeed. I like how you write; just like you were talking to the reader.
28Le Chat NoirWell, I have to agree with this, of course, but I guess that in my twisted mind, well, that was the first idea I got after reading this: the sword just might be the only cure for the unhealable wounds your pen may inflige. Hey. Yes, yes, I know, that's falling into melodrama, the darn, awful melodrama. Anyways, this is very, very good indeed. I like how you write; just like you were talking to the reader.
4/30/2002 c1 14Joan Milligan
It's like that:
I read a number of your vignettes. I find your ideas very interesting indeed.
However, you may want to consider writing them less as pure ideas and more as stories. Integrate the message into the plot, literary devices, characterization, all those can do marvels to a plain idea. You have an excellent heart of a story, however it still needs something to be its body.
Just a little bit of constructive criticism.
14Joan MilliganIt's like that:
I read a number of your vignettes. I find your ideas very interesting indeed.
However, you may want to consider writing them less as pure ideas and more as stories. Integrate the message into the plot, literary devices, characterization, all those can do marvels to a plain idea. You have an excellent heart of a story, however it still needs something to be its body.
Just a little bit of constructive criticism.
1/16/2002 c1 2The Shadow
True! Way true! Like this, with the pen your can use your imagination and let your mind fly, with a sword you just like, well, kill people. Way to go!
2The ShadowTrue! Way true! Like this, with the pen your can use your imagination and let your mind fly, with a sword you just like, well, kill people. Way to go!
1/13/2002 c1 18Dana R. Luder
I LOVE this one. It's so true, too - the pen is mightier than the sword. (Thanks for reviewing my work.) The theme behind it is great - and the way you portrayed it is so original! Thanks!
18Dana R. LuderI LOVE this one. It's so true, too - the pen is mightier than the sword. (Thanks for reviewing my work.) The theme behind it is great - and the way you portrayed it is so original! Thanks!
1/7/2002 c1 Kijlakduzy T. G. Azlig
Of course I do! You've made me see and agree with your views (of course, my views are easily wavered, so maybe the full extent of the power of this should be tested on somebody else) anyway, you've proved your point in your own way, proving it once again
Of course I do! You've made me see and agree with your views (of course, my views are easily wavered, so maybe the full extent of the power of this should be tested on somebody else) anyway, you've proved your point in your own way, proving it once again
1/7/2002 c1 Diago
I have read all your work- it is very good. You use language the way it was meant to be used, to convey feelings to others. I have noticed though, your lack of reviews which I am appalled at, a writter as good as you should have a cult following! Your work is great, please keep writing.
I have read all your work- it is very good. You use language the way it was meant to be used, to convey feelings to others. I have noticed though, your lack of reviews which I am appalled at, a writter as good as you should have a cult following! Your work is great, please keep writing.