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11/7/2002 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
This is honestly one of the best poems I read about 9/11. Really. I wrote one too but it was more inspirational. You touched a subject not many want to go into. It wasn't "Oh, we will survive" this. It was more sad and powerful. All in all, this a beautifully written poem. Keep on writing.~CT
6/5/2002 c1 64not sure yet
beautiful and well written, love it, nice job
4/14/2002 c1 63erisedilla
wow, this is incredibly haunting... amazing what a national tradgey can do to you... keep it up!
1/20/2002 c1 nawafiai
Nawww~~~? it's so good! (I'm sorry, too lazy to write a longer review...)
1/12/2002 c1 74Yelen
Simply amazing. I've read a few poems about 911, but this one is the best. I really like your poetry...I think you know that by know. This has become one of my favourites...unlike a lot of the ones I've read, it doesn't really...I don't know, take any sides, and the message is kind of cryptic and hidden, and again, unlike a lot of the ones I've read, it's not straight-out patriotism, like, "Go america! rah rah rah! We'll survive this!" While patriotism is fantastic, if you're into that sort of thing, I prefer poems that talk about the attack, but look at it from different viewpoints, like yours. Do you know what I'm talking about, 'cause I don't. But yeah, a great poem. You kick ass!
1/11/2002 c1 12Artsydoll
Hmm, what a concept...this is excellent! It's written really well and you have really good descriptions! Great job!

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