for I will worship4/3/2005 c1 
4SarahBridge
Wow! I really enjoyed this and can totally relate to the subject matter. You created such dramatic imagery; something I attempt to do when writing my own poems.
Writing is really important to me and I can tell from this poem that it is to you too. Would you mind if I added you to my 'favourite authors' list?
ThanksSarahx
4SarahBridgeWow! I really enjoyed this and can totally relate to the subject matter. You created such dramatic imagery; something I attempt to do when writing my own poems.
Writing is really important to me and I can tell from this poem that it is to you too. Would you mind if I added you to my 'favourite authors' list?
ThanksSarahx
5/17/2002 c1 Frodo
Hmmm... interesting perspective. I enjoyed reading it though. I'll check some other stuff out later.
Hmmm... interesting perspective. I enjoyed reading it though. I'll check some other stuff out later.
4/29/2002 c1 37Fallen Cresent Dragon
This is brilliant... I Love the way you've wrote this, and teh message that is displayed... Brilliant... *claps* ^^ ~FCD~
37Fallen Cresent DragonThis is brilliant... I Love the way you've wrote this, and teh message that is displayed... Brilliant... *claps* ^^ ~FCD~
4/12/2002 c1 25Damia Raven
Woah! that seemed a fierce shot at religion and i totally agree - your poetry is wicked - keep it up! ~Damia~
25Damia RavenWoah! that seemed a fierce shot at religion and i totally agree - your poetry is wicked - keep it up! ~Damia~
4/1/2002 c1 122Mistress Jakira
Hey, I liked that! :) Personally I'm not inclined to go against my religion-actually I have a lot of faith-but this poem spoke to me about "religious robots" as I call them, who seem not to realize that while there can be God or [insert other religious figure here as it applies] in a person's life, there's still a world out there. I'm not sure whether that's how you meant it, but that's what it said to me. And I like it a lot, actually. ^_^ Faith is so much different than religion...but I won't get into that (whether ranting or preaching, I can go on and on about religion, lol). In short? Good work, it said a lot. Keep writing! ~MJ
122Mistress JakiraHey, I liked that! :) Personally I'm not inclined to go against my religion-actually I have a lot of faith-but this poem spoke to me about "religious robots" as I call them, who seem not to realize that while there can be God or [insert other religious figure here as it applies] in a person's life, there's still a world out there. I'm not sure whether that's how you meant it, but that's what it said to me. And I like it a lot, actually. ^_^ Faith is so much different than religion...but I won't get into that (whether ranting or preaching, I can go on and on about religion, lol). In short? Good work, it said a lot. Keep writing! ~MJ
2/2/2002 c1 23Suzanne Star
THANK YOU! I'm a diest myself, and I've been forced into a life of Catholicism by a repressive mother. Religion is something to find on your own, not to be forced upon you by a book or "priest." I think this is going on my fav. stories list!
23Suzanne StarTHANK YOU! I'm a diest myself, and I've been forced into a life of Catholicism by a repressive mother. Religion is something to find on your own, not to be forced upon you by a book or "priest." I think this is going on my fav. stories list!
2/1/2002 c1 Staci Kaufmann
"and if I desire to worship words
then I will build a temple of novels"...
*Love* that. (and thankyou much for reviewing my works, btw). :-)
"and if I desire to worship words
then I will build a temple of novels"...
*Love* that. (and thankyou much for reviewing my works, btw). :-)
1/17/2002 c1 22Meegwun
Overall poem is delightfully scathing, and the entire last stanza is absolutely wonderful. There are freedom in your words.
22MeegwunOverall poem is delightfully scathing, and the entire last stanza is absolutely wonderful. There are freedom in your words.
1/13/2002 c1 71Toireasa
Chills, chills. I really love this poem... Really really love this poem! How do you do it? How do you get your words out in such a unique and talented fashion? If I could show this to my father, he'd freak and I'd be free! Nice work. Very beautiful.
-Toireasa
71ToireasaChills, chills. I really love this poem... Really really love this poem! How do you do it? How do you get your words out in such a unique and talented fashion? If I could show this to my father, he'd freak and I'd be free! Nice work. Very beautiful.
-Toireasa
1/11/2002 c1 1Negative-Z
You might very well be the only one to review those two little numbers whose spacing/formatting whatnot was, as I expected, mutilated from how they appeared on Microsoft word. Hopefully I'll figure out how to avoid that and submit more.
I admire your honest request for
feedback (I'm a bit bothered by people
who share their work and claim to have
no desire for it to affect someone). I chose this poem out of the lot because I have a taste for religious criticism (there's a multi-meaning term if ever I saw one). The sentiments expressed in this piece are direct but still fairly lyrical.
1Negative-ZYou might very well be the only one to review those two little numbers whose spacing/formatting whatnot was, as I expected, mutilated from how they appeared on Microsoft word. Hopefully I'll figure out how to avoid that and submit more.
I admire your honest request for
feedback (I'm a bit bothered by people
who share their work and claim to have
no desire for it to affect someone). I chose this poem out of the lot because I have a taste for religious criticism (there's a multi-meaning term if ever I saw one). The sentiments expressed in this piece are direct but still fairly lyrical.