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1/24/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
Amazing ending.
12/26/2005 c1 A B Lewis
Wow. Gimme shivers. Wait... So she's part of the gang? Or just paid to turn him in?And she dated an old guy?Dang, this sounds like a flame. It's not - this story is AWESOME.
8/15/2002 c1 2Thisend
Wow. Very interesting twist. You had a brilliant plot, and I think you could have developed it a little bit more, you kinda dropped off at a cliffhanger. It's a shame you couldn't just change this to a novel and... well, I won't lecture you on why you should enhance such a WONDERFUL and AMAZING and ASTONISHING and MARVELOUS idea. Well, *sigh*, even your short stories outdo everything I've ever written. *struck by jealousy-lol*

Your newest fan,

~*~Coley~*~
1/18/2002 c1 10Kira-14
kind of depressing, but good.

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