5/27/2009 c4 15SMGrimm
the author says that the angst is coming. pashaw! i say there already is angst between the two. anyway, good luck on your test and plz update soon. X3
the author says that the angst is coming. pashaw! i say there already is angst between the two. anyway, good luck on your test and plz update soon. X3
5/26/2009 c3 SMGrimm
omg! im going to kill you with all this angst that you put into this story. RAWR!
omg! im going to kill you with all this angst that you put into this story. RAWR!
5/26/2009 c1 SMGrimm
the big, birly dark seme to the smaller, lighter uke. good job of creating the characters this time. hahaha.
the big, birly dark seme to the smaller, lighter uke. good job of creating the characters this time. hahaha.
3/27/2005 c4 2Pixiestyxs1
This is an interesting beginning but I noticed that it hasn't been updated for over three years. Are you ever going to finish it?
This is an interesting beginning but I noticed that it hasn't been updated for over three years. Are you ever going to finish it?
7/7/2004 c4 ravensthief
Update! So many of your stories have great beginnings, but they're all too short! T_T
Update! So many of your stories have great beginnings, but they're all too short! T_T
9/20/2003 c4 Lawrence Miisa
Must continue story. The characters are very good. Danyl is lovable. I must know what happens next.
Must continue story. The characters are very good. Danyl is lovable. I must know what happens next.
7/20/2003 c4 26Falling-Hawk13
Oh it is so good but will they ever do something i mean they clearly like each other. Great writing continue soon.
DM13
Oh it is so good but will they ever do something i mean they clearly like each other. Great writing continue soon.
DM13
4/12/2003 c4 Snowflake
Oh my god, I just saw that it's been over a year since you updated this story! And that's such a shame because it's really really good! At least I think so and I just hope you'll continue with it! Truth to tell I like it more than your other stories.. although I like them too :D Well, I guess I'll just wait and hope for an update :)
(and good luck with this project of yours if that's what's keeping you away from writing more ^^)
Oh my god, I just saw that it's been over a year since you updated this story! And that's such a shame because it's really really good! At least I think so and I just hope you'll continue with it! Truth to tell I like it more than your other stories.. although I like them too :D Well, I guess I'll just wait and hope for an update :)
(and good luck with this project of yours if that's what's keeping you away from writing more ^^)
4/5/2003 c4 7Lami
wonderful so far. i like that there isn't any inner dialogue, leaves it open to interpetaion and makes you think..
continue soon please.
wonderful so far. i like that there isn't any inner dialogue, leaves it open to interpetaion and makes you think..
continue soon please.
12/29/2002 c4 Anonymous Z
Oh, come on! You can't leave me hanging like that! C'mon, write more! Please?
Oh, come on! You can't leave me hanging like that! C'mon, write more! Please?
10/30/2002 c4 2Cris Jones
Cool! I didn't know you had your fics on FF.net! I was upset when I tried to go on your site and it was gone (did you move it?) So I was really glad that you have your stuff on here.
Update soon!
Cool! I didn't know you had your fics on FF.net! I was upset when I tried to go on your site and it was gone (did you move it?) So I was really glad that you have your stuff on here.
Update soon!