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1/15/2002 c1 1Bitterscarlet
This is stunning. I'm very inarticulate this evening so that's all I'll say.
1/14/2002 c1 litebrite
I love the first stanza...and I like the last one though the bit about the pulpit is too random for your image. Unless pulpit has some other meaning that I'm unaware of..which is quite possible. The middle I'm not too keen on...there might be another way to continue the metaphor and make what you want to say more subtle. But it also could just be a matter of personal taste on my part. I do like the lines in the middle "I want to grab your hand in mind/" did you mean that word? "and pull you towards the/light"
1/14/2002 c1 22Gevo
cool

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