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9/24/2003 c1 freedman121
I just need to tell you... You might want to put something there about how if he had told her that he loved her, maybe she wouldn't have died. It's just a suggestion.
1/18/2002 c1 pretty gurl meets pretty boy
Good story...however...guys usually do not think in that aspect. In our Western society and some other societies, guys generally do not act in the way as the boy did in your story. Maybe, he was different, but I thought I would point it out...delete this review if you want if you think it's a flame...it's not...just thought I would let you know...but still it was sweet.
1/15/2002 c1 1Bitterscarlet
NICELY twisted ending! Gotta love standing in the rain too...Did it last night.
1/14/2002 c1 2Athena Winner
That was prodigious. I don't understand all of it but, prodigious.
1/14/2002 c1 5Komataka
So sad...my heart aches. How horrible it would be to see one of the most beautiful things in your life die before your very eyes...keep up the work.

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