
3/17/2005 c1
8TheQueenOfSpace
Very nice. This was really good. BTW, thank you so much for the reviews! It meant so much to me, especially with that particular story I wrote. Keep writing!

Very nice. This was really good. BTW, thank you so much for the reviews! It meant so much to me, especially with that particular story I wrote. Keep writing!
1/7/2003 c1 Pen21
this is what people take for granted. their senses, people fear the sense of feeling because they fear pain. but with pain cme another part of life, and every sense makes up life...and as you said, everthing hold the sorse of life. including death.
this is what people take for granted. their senses, people fear the sense of feeling because they fear pain. but with pain cme another part of life, and every sense makes up life...and as you said, everthing hold the sorse of life. including death.
5/25/2002 c1
7Lee Harvey Kennedy
Shiro, nice job. It had some meaning to it, and seemed pretty deep. I need to be scoping out poems, because soon I'll need to write a really touching one for a character in School Spirit. Still hard at work on it, just got over some writer's block, so expect some really good stuff soon!
~Notum~

Shiro, nice job. It had some meaning to it, and seemed pretty deep. I need to be scoping out poems, because soon I'll need to write a really touching one for a character in School Spirit. Still hard at work on it, just got over some writer's block, so expect some really good stuff soon!
~Notum~
3/30/2002 c1 mwahahaha
u must mean or is it sumthing to savour! nice poem has a nice meaning to it and it's very inspiring! how did you get inspired for it anyway?
u must mean or is it sumthing to savour! nice poem has a nice meaning to it and it's very inspiring! how did you get inspired for it anyway?
3/6/2002 c1
12All Mighty Terrestrial
Cool little musing. I like the way you wrote your prose, it almost feels like one of those Greek treatises that the old philosophers wrote.

Cool little musing. I like the way you wrote your prose, it almost feels like one of those Greek treatises that the old philosophers wrote.
1/16/2002 c1 watercreature
GOOD LUCK too. (sorry, i forgot the first time)
GOOD LUCK too. (sorry, i forgot the first time)