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12/20/2002 c1 31CaramelMacchiato
It's actually quite good! Although I do recommend usage of capital letters and punctuation. Great use of metaphors! Keep writing!

PS: Thanks for reviewing some of my creations! I really do appreciate it.
12/17/2002 c1 12la presa de la noche
sweet! i'm a pyro, so more sweet! ya gotta love fire, and i know, you don't, but hey, as long as you're safe with it, fire is pretty kewl. i love this poem. very descriptive. i love it!
12/15/2002 c1 100Keep it 100
Cool.

~Heart of the Sword
12/6/2002 c1 29splotchikins
oh I liked this poem. It was really good how you described fire...I found it also veerryy interesting. Interesting in a good way ^^;; I'm not really good with words so I'll just say that i liked your poem and now it's time to keep my mouth shut before I say somethin' rude... -_- Bye.
11/17/2002 c1 35Knife Thrower
I'm not afraid of fire, so it was interesting to read a poem about it in the P.O.V. who IS afraid of it.
11/17/2002 c1 15Genevieve Sente
Wow, I like this one a lot. You're a really good writer.
11/16/2002 c1 6Dark Anubis
I liked your poem.You wrote so beautifully.
11/8/2002 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Beautiful poem about fire. My goodness, you have a lot of reviews and I can see why! Nice job.~CT
10/9/2002 c1 57bubblesbeccka
can see why you hate fire. This is good and is written in a style that i write a few of mine in, it's good so listen to your heart not what other people are saying
10/5/2002 c1 38Lady Tenjin
I think this is very beautiful. It gave me beautiful images.
10/5/2002 c1 HawkHearted
Very cool! I like that bit about "death loves you". You've certainly put fire into words very well.
9/24/2002 c1 15Majare Sanguine
Isn't it odd how we find our selves fearing that which is what we find so fascinating. A thrill of sorts, something to be covented yet feared. It's a very interesting poem, i like the use of other references to fire, rather enchanting, very brief, very vauge, and exactly how a poem should be. A sort of...take from it what you will sort of thing. Oh and by the way, i thank you for the reivew of my poetry, i do tend to write quiet a few dark things with a poetry type some what different from that of yours, but all aspects of life and death are the same no matter what battle field you stand on. - Adieu
8/30/2002 c1 3Julia Griever
whoa...thats very cool!1
8/10/2002 c1 wqwq
the 1st and 2nd lines r kewl
8/4/2002 c1 10Hikarineko Skadi
nevermind this is my FAV i'm a fire element and i love fire every time i see it i'm captured by it's disires sorry i spell so things wrong it almost 5:00am
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