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5/3/2006 c1 593Morwain
interesting
11/8/2003 c1 186Emi Amara
hi! oh, this is cool, morning and dawning ryhme! nice ending too,

cya =)

- winged girl
11/8/2003 c1 agny
I don't quite understand this one. I#m stupid.
6/5/2003 c1 128Zainab
Cool transition from the second line to the last line.
5/7/2003 c1 13just like me
Oh, that was really good. (Sorry my reviews suck...) I liked it
3/8/2003 c1 toysoldier
wow. this is so beautiful, so simple, but what a wonderful way to describe a moment. I love your poetry!

T.S.
2/21/2003 c1 33Aurora Barrett
I don't see it as depressing at all. It does have many meanings. Wait. I change my mind. It can be slightly depressing depending on how you read it. I'm reading it over and over as I read this. They say haikus are primarily written about seasons, but I think they're good for topics which don't require many words. Or things you don't have many words for. Newayz. Not gonna waste your time with my babblings. Newayz.. I like this. Excellent work.

~Aurora Barrett~
12/19/2002 c1 12la presa de la noche
double meanings? ok. um...oh, i think i get it. yes, i was warned. i like this haiku.
10/13/2002 c1 8Pretty Barn Owl
Pure elegance. I am in awe. You have astounding insight and a talent for sharing it with the world.

I put you on my fav. authors list, so I'll be back.
10/5/2002 c1 38Lady Tenjin
a little depressing, I must say. But lovely as usualy.
8/10/2002 c1 wqwq
future is always depressing
8/8/2002 c1 10Hikarineko Skadi
it pretty and a little depressing but hey the future is depressing.. see ya kari
5/27/2002 c1 26moonbunny38
what can i say? yet another great poem.
5/26/2002 c1 1Laralanthalasa
Neat one! This one makes me think of Oracles and such. Keep writing!
5/20/2002 c1 32The one and only STAR
Lovely...you're great. BTW, thanks for reviewing my stuff ^_^
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