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2/14/2014 c1 xxx1000
Though I like some of your descriptive pros, I was kind of confused throughout the story...
10/12/2001 c1 14Allana
Okay, I *know* I've reviewed this one. I just have a small request: MORE! C'MON! GIMME MOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! I LOVE THIS PLOT LINE AND I WANT TO KNOW WHERE THE HECK IT'S GONNA GO! I WANNA KNOW MORE ABOUT EVAN! PLEASE! I COULD EVEN HELP YOU WITH IT! Okay, I'm done ranting now.
11/8/2000 c1 7Anya Myrla
Oh,you cant leave it like this!I hope you write more soon!:) Btw,(if that isnt quite obvious)i loved this storie.You write very well,but i really want to know what's going on.I mean,who is that guy?And why did he do that?Oh,you really should write a sequel. :)
8/6/2000 c1 Allana
Yes, I remember this... cool! I think you edited it since last I saw it...
4/11/2000 c1 Kat
I MUST know what's gonna happen! LoL Couple of typos, nuthing major. This is realy intresting. Keep it going!

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