6/24/2005 c1 3The Punk Rock Poet
Very good work. this poem, could reach out to others, and your words were so powerful , maybe that is what you should say to someone when the are hurting. It sounds very meaningful! And i could tell you care about those in your life.The Smart One

8/19/2000 c1 15Pixie
I like your others better. This was a different style than your others. I like how you write it in verses. It is around the same subject as your other one and i enjoyed all your poems.