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5/25/2003 c1 13Mysweetsummer
this feels choppy, as if there are different poems inside. if that was purposeful, good job. If not, i would suggest reading for the sound and looking for ways to make the sound, well, sound complete
1/19/2002 c1 10Dreamweaver2
ooooooooooo, sad. I like sad poetry, it helps to inspire more depressing (and bad) poetry on my part. really good! :P
8/19/2000 c1 15Pixie
This is sad but very profound. I really love the way this can be interpreted so many ways. Very good work!

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