
2/1/2002 c1
53absolute0
I like the power expressed in your poem. It is very powerful and yet very sad. You make a parallel comparison out of the dark sky and your feelings. This is a very good poem. First attempt at poetry, eh? Well done! =)

I like the power expressed in your poem. It is very powerful and yet very sad. You make a parallel comparison out of the dark sky and your feelings. This is a very good poem. First attempt at poetry, eh? Well done! =)
1/28/2002 c1 Honeybunches
Okay and cut! That's a wrap folks! Okay now... hey don't touch that! Oh let go of me! No not my head! Ahhhh!
Okay and cut! That's a wrap folks! Okay now... hey don't touch that! Oh let go of me! No not my head! Ahhhh!