
3/24/2002 c2 Daichi
This story rocks!
This story rocks!
2/18/2002 c1 Lilandra Silverwolf
Very good. I like how you blended the story with the lyrics. I can't wait to read more.
Lilandra
Very good. I like how you blended the story with the lyrics. I can't wait to read more.
Lilandra
2/17/2002 c1 Jehika
This is an awesome story...truely. The descripitons are good, but the womans name may need to be used a bit more, just for effect. The actual line is much of what a Hollywood Vampire would be like. I myself, being a goth, and a vampire, would be happy to read a fiction novel about this woman, there is more beneath the surface that hasnt been told here.
This is an awesome story...truely. The descripitons are good, but the womans name may need to be used a bit more, just for effect. The actual line is much of what a Hollywood Vampire would be like. I myself, being a goth, and a vampire, would be happy to read a fiction novel about this woman, there is more beneath the surface that hasnt been told here.