for The Darkside of Happily Ever After5/9/2006 c1 Jackie Illy
I was thinking about your poem again today. Just thought I would tell you I still think it's beautiful.
I was thinking about your poem again today. Just thought I would tell you I still think it's beautiful.
5/6/2005 c1 
75cupcakexcutie
pretty good. i really liked the first few lines. definately well worded. again, good job.
75cupcakexcutiepretty good. i really liked the first few lines. definately well worded. again, good job.
11/15/2003 c1 Reinairi
Let me reiterate a point brought up by another reviewer.
How in heck is nothing you wrote not published?
Words really fail me after reading your work.
Let me reiterate a point brought up by another reviewer.
How in heck is nothing you wrote not published?
Words really fail me after reading your work.
11/10/2003 c1 7K.H. Ivywater
It's been how long? Years? And I still love this poem, Sarie. It's one of my favorites. Truly.
- Jackie (Illyandria)
7K.H. IvywaterIt's been how long? Years? And I still love this poem, Sarie. It's one of my favorites. Truly.
- Jackie (Illyandria)
6/29/2002 c1 26Charm
Sorry to bother you again... naturally i found something else of yours to read after my last comment... Something about your style is very compelling. I approve. :P If that means anything to you, you have my stamp of approval and permanent hand held out for a dual effort anytime.
~Charm
26CharmSorry to bother you again... naturally i found something else of yours to read after my last comment... Something about your style is very compelling. I approve. :P If that means anything to you, you have my stamp of approval and permanent hand held out for a dual effort anytime.
~Charm
7/5/2001 c1 Naboo Girl
Beautiful, but you know what? Men are idiots anyway. They either ditch you, or stalk you. No concept of "middle ground." You're better off without 'em, hon ;)
Still, I like the way this flows. Something about the parentheses makes it appealing. Keep it up.
Beautiful, but you know what? Men are idiots anyway. They either ditch you, or stalk you. No concept of "middle ground." You're better off without 'em, hon ;)
Still, I like the way this flows. Something about the parentheses makes it appealing. Keep it up.
7/4/2001 c1 39Cgonzales
Very very sad Sar :( it kept my attention till the end when I got lost in Eden... how very heartfealt... keep up the good work...
-Aerill
39CgonzalesVery very sad Sar :( it kept my attention till the end when I got lost in Eden... how very heartfealt... keep up the good work...
-Aerill
6/14/2001 c1 7K'Hal the V
how in the world ... explain to me why you don't have anything published professionally?
7K'Hal the Vhow in the world ... explain to me why you don't have anything published professionally?
8/14/2000 c1 Dr. Tamwe
Wow. This is the best poem of yours I've read so far. Great use of words! Now, on to the next one...
Wow. This is the best poem of yours I've read so far. Great use of words! Now, on to the next one...