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7/2/2006 c1 2Aleah Rayne
This is really a good poem. Loved the vivid descriptions.
11/3/2003 c1 3Killua chan
so good! O_O;; wow...
9/18/2003 c1 9Hana
A really great poem. Glad I stumbled over this one. I just love how you describe the scene. Anyway great work!
7/2/2001 c1 5storyfish
Absolutely beautiful poem! I love the autumn hunter imagery. I've seen so much teenage angst poetry (not that teenage angst is a BAD thing...) on the FFN that it's a rare and happy surprise to read a poem that's not!
6/21/2001 c1 Angelique
I love the way you use words! Especcially in the end, you could almost feel the way the seasons do. I thought it was spectactular.
6/13/2001 c1 7Bria
Beatiful! I love poetry, and weather is a great topic to explore with it. :) ~*~Bria
5/1/2001 c1 5Athenas Beauty
a wonderful work of art, many details that usually escape the regular writer. very nice.
1/31/2001 c1 3Tigger1
very good!
1/4/2001 c1 the net slayerette
I like the last lines best.
9/13/2000 c1 7Sandiya
Stalk, descreet, unsheathed...words that just tell the story. It didn't rhyme, but most poems don't ^_^;; Often it's too bothersome. Well, simply terrific. ^.^
8/14/2000 c1 13Dendera
Lovely ;) It sounds like something I'd write- I love Autumn. Beautiful, poignant use of words.
8/14/2000 c1 11A. Ushio
Pleasantly technical, but a little disconcertingly random.

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