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8/8/2005 c1 1LuckieCharmz
well written and imaginative. nice job
2/16/2004 c1 10artgirl101
that is a very interesting thought. i thought it was good for being half asleep lol. I have a story i wrote about being in a coma. If you would like to read it that would be great. Mine is a little different then your out look on it. but i think yours is really close too. great job.
2/7/2002 c1 17The Haiku Police
The first one is wrong. The HKP may soon be in a coma if more and more people hate us.
2/4/2002 c1 31Cindy Moon
i like the message that this poem gives

it makes perfect sense as well
2/2/2002 c1 12Artsydoll
That's excellent! I love the line "a cloud of death lingers on". Very well written. Excellent job!
2/2/2002 c1 22Gevo
i never thought about what that would be like
2/2/2002 c1 9besogne
i have been in a coma, but i can't tell you what it's like because i don't remember. that's the point of a coma, you have no conscious thought. interesting idea though.

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