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1/9/2003 c1 27werechick
Incredible.
11/16/2002 c1 252account inactive00000
ach, i know this feeling. this is wonderful
5/9/2002 c1 17Jade6
You are a really talented poet... I love some of the images you create here... especially about reality being quicksand... I love the picture I form in my head while I am reading this... you have the gift!
4/22/2002 c1 4Spyre
The pace and play on words is great here.

The images and sensations are classic

and spun to a unique note.

Yet another jaded bullseye!

;)

as ever:

s p y r e
3/3/2002 c1 4alicesun
this is great, I like the descriptions, it reminds me of a music clip
2/4/2002 c1 7craaack
Hey! Really cool poem. U managed to capture all those sensory experiences that are so hard to capture. Well done! I especially like the quicksand analogy, and the effect u gave the last two lines is really good.

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