for Daughter of the Desert6/15/2003 c13 crazyreadergirl
i cried .that was beautiful .and Tank
sounded so fine !the story is really cute,too.
i cried .that was beautiful .and Tank
sounded so fine !the story is really cute,too.
6/12/2003 c13 Rebecca
Where did you go? It has been way too long since you have updated. Please do so SOON! I love this story!
Where did you go? It has been way too long since you have updated. Please do so SOON! I love this story!
6/6/2003 c1 ll
are you ever going to update? it has been over 3 months!
are you ever going to update? it has been over 3 months!
6/6/2003 c13 Silver Shadow
You have to hurry up with the next chapter! I'm hooked to this story.
You have to hurry up with the next chapter! I'm hooked to this story.
6/5/2003 c13 Lady Shang
This is really good. Please update soon.
This is really good. Please update soon.
5/31/2003 c13 Artfully Lime
OMG! Max has just GOT to re-meet up with Tank. maybe meet his future self or something.
I think thyat your idea about having this story published is a good one..unfortunatly i'm quite lacking in funds myself so any contributions of mine wouldn't amount to anything more than a couple of bukcs
anyway good luck :OP keep up the great work. POST SOON !
OMG! Max has just GOT to re-meet up with Tank. maybe meet his future self or something.
I think thyat your idea about having this story published is a good one..unfortunatly i'm quite lacking in funds myself so any contributions of mine wouldn't amount to anything more than a couple of bukcs
anyway good luck :OP keep up the great work. POST SOON !
5/31/2003 c10 Artfully Lime
Whoa! this fic is mind blowing! you're such a great writer : ) i love how you've created the characters of Tank and Max!1 i can just imagine exactly how Tank wud look and act...*sigh* Max kinda actually reminds me of myself and the mystery and intrigue are well...intriguing :OP
keep up the GREAT work! Post again soon
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Whoa! this fic is mind blowing! you're such a great writer : ) i love how you've created the characters of Tank and Max!1 i can just imagine exactly how Tank wud look and act...*sigh* Max kinda actually reminds me of myself and the mystery and intrigue are well...intriguing :OP
keep up the GREAT work! Post again soon
o_0
5/29/2003 c13 Smidjett
Have you totally given up on this story and stopped writing it? it has been forever since you updated ! please write more soon!
Have you totally given up on this story and stopped writing it? it has been forever since you updated ! please write more soon!
15/24/2003 c13 thisfemme
love your story! write more soon please! its so...um...i dunt knoe how tooh say it..its juss a beautiful story that i hope ill be able tooh finish reading.
love your story! write more soon please! its so...um...i dunt knoe how tooh say it..its juss a beautiful story that i hope ill be able tooh finish reading.
5/24/2003 c13 ChocolateStrawberriez
This story has one of the most intresting plots that I've read. Yet people wrote about being back in time before but you actually put the time into looking up about King Tut and all the other people. Even if some of it is not fact.
This story has one of the most intresting plots that I've read. Yet people wrote about being back in time before but you actually put the time into looking up about King Tut and all the other people. Even if some of it is not fact.
5/23/2003 c13 You can bite my ass
OMG! WHAT THE HELL? WHERE"S THE REST? YOU CAN SO NOT LEAVE IT THERE! THAT"S CRUEL! UNKIND! EVIL. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. *shakes fist* it better come out soon...
OMG! WHAT THE HELL? WHERE"S THE REST? YOU CAN SO NOT LEAVE IT THERE! THAT"S CRUEL! UNKIND! EVIL. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. *shakes fist* it better come out soon...
5/7/2003 c13 Diiniam
You have to update soon,or I will...er...do something very bad!
You have to update soon,or I will...er...do something very bad!
5/6/2003 c13 fearo18
please update soon i'd like to read the rest of the story. sofar its realy good and i think it can only get better so hurry up and update so u can prove me right
please update soon i'd like to read the rest of the story. sofar its realy good and i think it can only get better so hurry up and update so u can prove me right