for Daughter of the Desert6/20/2007 c5 ski bird
really nice. i love her defiance ;)
creative.
fascinating. so tut is not mean...
is she gonna try to save him?
really nice. i love her defiance ;)
creative.
fascinating. so tut is not mean...
is she gonna try to save him?
6/20/2007 c4 ski bird
ok no offense but there's this other story that has almost the same plot as urs...
except that she wasn't a slave and she goes to egypt when she sleeps...
i think it's by tessandra. don't know. i really doubt that u guys knew about this. this is good ;)
hers isn't completed yet so...
ok no offense but there's this other story that has almost the same plot as urs...
except that she wasn't a slave and she goes to egypt when she sleeps...
i think it's by tessandra. don't know. i really doubt that u guys knew about this. this is good ;)
hers isn't completed yet so...
6/20/2007 c3 ski bird
god... slave auction!
very captivating and interesting.
creative.
god... slave auction!
very captivating and interesting.
creative.
6/20/2007 c2 ski bird
cool computer ;)
so what happened? and who was the guy in the dream...
so the guides.. the girl has known them for some time? is that why they gave her the name? i feel sorry for her to have parents like that.. do the guides know about her being special?
i will read on and find out ;)
cool computer ;)
so what happened? and who was the guy in the dream...
so the guides.. the girl has known them for some time? is that why they gave her the name? i feel sorry for her to have parents like that.. do the guides know about her being special?
i will read on and find out ;)
6/20/2007 c1 ski bird
good start
good start
4/24/2007 c12 ess3sandra
so thats wher ethe heart came from, and then a spear, damn this shit is heavy!
so thats wher ethe heart came from, and then a spear, damn this shit is heavy!
4/23/2007 c9 ess3sandra
love. the greatest illusion of them all, yet... well i like to believe in a fairytale, they can come true i think. or i hope.
love. the greatest illusion of them all, yet... well i like to believe in a fairytale, they can come true i think. or i hope.
4/23/2007 c8 ess3sandra
aw, this is just perfect. how you use your charachters and how the plot is progressing, well done indeed.
aw, this is just perfect. how you use your charachters and how the plot is progressing, well done indeed.
4/23/2007 c6 ess3sandra
laughs, and finally the hardcore drama went away, and a lovely humor approach was being made, hehe.
laughs, and finally the hardcore drama went away, and a lovely humor approach was being made, hehe.
4/23/2007 c5 ess3sandra
whoho, that sure was an dramatic entrance, never befoer ha´ve i wished to be blond, sighs! well done, grins.
whoho, that sure was an dramatic entrance, never befoer ha´ve i wished to be blond, sighs! well done, grins.