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10/30/2005 c1 FictionPressPenName
Lol! Very funny! Can't think of anything wrong with it.
6/13/2005 c1 27RosepetalDoll
"wish i had a coat"...you are awosome. yr poems rock! excuse me i meant haikus!~rosie
6/17/2003 c1 16Wooffles
Ok...
8/5/2002 c1 1Cranky Cathe
imma gonna counter ure haiku with my own

rain brings out tha snails

and then when the snails breathe out...

wow! pretty bubbles
7/27/2002 c1 13Aesthete
Heh...heh...that was funny..
3/8/2002 c1 Amariia
Here's a thought. Maybe the water will bring the life back to your brain. ^_^
3/6/2002 c1 Staci Kaufmann
*g* Like your stuff! Funny haiku rule... :-)
3/1/2002 c1 GypsyQueen
Breathtaking dear hearts,

But why waste a good down pour,

On plastic death traps?

So I find rain euphoric... *sticks out tongue* You other chicks out there can have your chocolate and oysters. Give me a good storm any day of the week! *starts to get huffy and 'storms' off*
2/27/2002 c1 37BeautifulWickedness
Haha! Very good! *grin*
2/22/2002 c1 4Angelicpixie
Cute poem, I hardly ever have time to review anyones poem... I hope you dont flame me on my stuff.. wonders... yes i do spell things wrong just to far warn you... bu i think you guys have some great talent. You're right but do listen to both stories instead of your own..
2/13/2002 c1 10Wan
good one.
2/12/2002 c1 22Meegwun
literal image

Haikus can be abstract too

wish i had an axe...

Kidding, kidding. Good.

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