for Water1/6/2005 c1 
28Orphans' Wail
not bad, could use a little more thought. Your style is really fluid, but not suited for haikus.
28Orphans' Wailnot bad, could use a little more thought. Your style is really fluid, but not suited for haikus.
10/2/2003 c1 3GameFreak7744
woo-hoo erosion kinda spoils it, but its good anyway, i like it.
can you please delete that anon who said yawn, but really long? its so annoying.
Also could you please R&R my stories?
3GameFreak7744woo-hoo erosion kinda spoils it, but its good anyway, i like it.
can you please delete that anon who said yawn, but really long? its so annoying.
Also could you please R&R my stories?
1/26/2003 c1 3seashell
Water is much better than that! Water is beautyful! water is life! Water is everywhere! respect the water.
3seashellWater is much better than that! Water is beautyful! water is life! Water is everywhere! respect the water.
3/27/2002 c1 68LunarBard
Now that was good. It made me chuckle- lot better than some of the more serious haikus i've seen
68LunarBardNow that was good. It made me chuckle- lot better than some of the more serious haikus i've seen
3/11/2002 c1 i hate my boyfriend
hahahahaha...that was funny...i think u people might have some psychological issues tho.
hahahahaha...that was funny...i think u people might have some psychological issues tho.
3/8/2002 c1 18americananime
YOU PEOPLE ARE DRIVING ME OUT OF MY SKULL! My poor best friend is here (actually, it's her house...) watching me flame as fast as I can, and hiding her face in her hands... when they're not clapping. The last lines always ruin yours! Gah! i'm going to watch Tombstone again.
18americananimeYOU PEOPLE ARE DRIVING ME OUT OF MY SKULL! My poor best friend is here (actually, it's her house...) watching me flame as fast as I can, and hiding her face in her hands... when they're not clapping. The last lines always ruin yours! Gah! i'm going to watch Tombstone again.
3/1/2002 c1 SERVES YOU RIGHT
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