for The Forbidden12/5/2002 c12 Rosa
Did you did some of this from Monty Python and the Holy Grail? It sure seems like it.
Did you did some of this from Monty Python and the Holy Grail? It sure seems like it.
8/12/2002 c16 
2Blue Nissa
the storyline and concept are pretty good. the end seemed kind of rushed and predictable, and sometimes (because i skip alot) i was kind of lost. there were too many romantic parts **grooooan** (but thus is the fate of an anti-romanticist, isn't it?) when her hair was all messed up i kept on picturing her as the sound of music lady with ranuka singing "the hiiilllllllllfff are aliiiiive, with the foooound of muuuuuuuuuuufiiiiiiic..." and it cracked me up (give me a break it's 2 in the morning). yes that was entirely irrelevant but anyways this was a well spent 4 hours.
2Blue Nissathe storyline and concept are pretty good. the end seemed kind of rushed and predictable, and sometimes (because i skip alot) i was kind of lost. there were too many romantic parts **grooooan** (but thus is the fate of an anti-romanticist, isn't it?) when her hair was all messed up i kept on picturing her as the sound of music lady with ranuka singing "the hiiilllllllllfff are aliiiiive, with the foooound of muuuuuuuuuuufiiiiiiic..." and it cracked me up (give me a break it's 2 in the morning). yes that was entirely irrelevant but anyways this was a well spent 4 hours.
7/16/2002 c16 9Blood-Covered-Ivory
This was a great story. When I started to read it tonight, I couldn't stop until I was finished. It had a really great story line, but a feel that the end was rushed. You might've been able to prolong it a bit. I'm sorry I can't leave a longer review, but it's 3 in the morning now and I should've gone to bed hours ago. G'night
9Blood-Covered-IvoryThis was a great story. When I started to read it tonight, I couldn't stop until I was finished. It had a really great story line, but a feel that the end was rushed. You might've been able to prolong it a bit. I'm sorry I can't leave a longer review, but it's 3 in the morning now and I should've gone to bed hours ago. G'night
3/11/2002 c16 kittyluver87 I'm too lazy to sign in
This was sooooooo good! I thought you were going ot kill her for a moment! I would have yelled so much in this review if you had killed her! But I love happy endings! I want a sequel to this! Please! I would read it, even if no one else did! This was such a great story! I loved it! Every single part of it! And Morina and Lumin together, priceless! This was such a great story! I just love it! But I want a sequel! HEHEHE! You did a great job with this story!
This was sooooooo good! I thought you were going ot kill her for a moment! I would have yelled so much in this review if you had killed her! But I love happy endings! I want a sequel to this! Please! I would read it, even if no one else did! This was such a great story! I loved it! Every single part of it! And Morina and Lumin together, priceless! This was such a great story! I just love it! But I want a sequel! HEHEHE! You did a great job with this story!
3/10/2002 c15 kittyluver87
How dare you leave me on a cliff hanger like that? How dare you! I love this story, but Desiree can not die! You must get the next segment up really really soon! How Dare you? How dare you? This has got to be the worst cliff hanger anyone has ever left me on! GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
How dare you leave me on a cliff hanger like that? How dare you! I love this story, but Desiree can not die! You must get the next segment up really really soon! How Dare you? How dare you? This has got to be the worst cliff hanger anyone has ever left me on! GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
3/10/2002 c14 kittyluver87 Not logged in as usual
That was a really good segment! I hope you add more soon, cuz I want Desiree to be on the thrown again! And I want her to marry Blake! So please hurry up with the next segment! You are such a great writer and this is good as always!
That was a really good segment! I hope you add more soon, cuz I want Desiree to be on the thrown again! And I want her to marry Blake! So please hurry up with the next segment! You are such a great writer and this is good as always!
3/9/2002 c13 kittyluver87 not logged in
Wow! this is sooooooooo good! I feel like I'm reading a story from a famous bestselling author! Keep up the good work! And please post more soon! I just love this story! It's really really good! Please get the next segment out really really really soon!
Wow! this is sooooooooo good! I feel like I'm reading a story from a famous bestselling author! Keep up the good work! And please post more soon! I just love this story! It's really really good! Please get the next segment out really really really soon!
3/8/2002 c12 kittyluver87 not logged in
Oh this is sooooooooooooooooo good! I love this story! But you have to leave me on such a cliffy? How dare you! Please add the next segment up soon! I just love this story, and I want more! I'm just sooooo hooked on it!
Oh this is sooooooooooooooooo good! I love this story! But you have to leave me on such a cliffy? How dare you! Please add the next segment up soon! I just love this story, and I want more! I'm just sooooo hooked on it!
3/8/2002 c11 kittyluver87 I'm too lazy to sign in
Oh this is a really good chapter! Ha I finished reading it at 6:20 A.M., now I gotta go get ready for school. Darn! Oh well, at least it's Friday! Please update this soon! It's really really really good!
Oh this is a really good chapter! Ha I finished reading it at 6:20 A.M., now I gotta go get ready for school. Darn! Oh well, at least it's Friday! Please update this soon! It's really really really good!
3/6/2002 c10 kittyluver87 I'm too lazy to sign in
Oh this is soooooooo good! I'm so glad you updated! I want more! You had me hooked from the beginning! I love this story!
Oh this is soooooooo good! I'm so glad you updated! I want more! You had me hooked from the beginning! I love this story!
2/28/2002 c9 kittyluver87 not logged in
Oh that made me so sad with the part about Blake! How could you? I want Desiree to be happy with Blake! But I'm glad they got the horn and can now go back to Maddiss and get her voice back! This story is good! You have to put up more now! Please! I'll get down on my knees and beg if I have to!
Oh that made me so sad with the part about Blake! How could you? I want Desiree to be happy with Blake! But I'm glad they got the horn and can now go back to Maddiss and get her voice back! This story is good! You have to put up more now! Please! I'll get down on my knees and beg if I have to!
2/28/2002 c8 kittyluver87 Not logged in as usual
OMG! I love this story! I bet Blake realizes it's Desiree! He has too! she's his true love! Well I'm off to read chapter 9! I can't wait to find out what happens!
OMG! I love this story! I bet Blake realizes it's Desiree! He has too! she's his true love! Well I'm off to read chapter 9! I can't wait to find out what happens!
2/26/2002 c7 kittyluver87 not logged in
Oh you have got to add more to this! I love this story! Please get the next chapter up soon! it's just soooooooooooo good! But for some reason my computer isn't showing that you updated, but oh well. At least I checked and got to read it! Keep up the good work!
Oh you have got to add more to this! I love this story! Please get the next chapter up soon! it's just soooooooooooo good! But for some reason my computer isn't showing that you updated, but oh well. At least I checked and got to read it! Keep up the good work!
2/23/2002 c6 kittyluver87 not logged in
Oh this is soooooooo good! I love this story! You have to get the next chapter up soon! It's just so good! You have to write more! You have too! Please!
Oh this is soooooooo good! I love this story! You have to get the next chapter up soon! It's just so good! You have to write more! You have too! Please!
2/16/2002 c5 kittyluver87 not logged in
Oh please get the next chapter up soon! I love this story! You had me interested just from the title! I feel like I'm reading a story from a famous author! Please hurry up with the next chapter!
Oh please get the next chapter up soon! I love this story! You had me interested just from the title! I feel like I'm reading a story from a famous author! Please hurry up with the next chapter!