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9/29/2002 c1 94Glowing Embers
(lol) sorry i kind of thought this one was funny. once again, great poem! i've read a bit of your other work to, but so far this one is my favorite.

~Glowing Embers
9/24/2002 c1 5Traveller
Hi! I am one of your schoolmates. Among the three gals? You should know. I think this is cool and cute. Nice, yah!
9/4/2002 c1 Zylo
Whatever. I think it rocks. Great idea.
8/17/2002 c1 64not sure yet
ad, but i havve found this to be true in my life too, very nicely done
6/12/2002 c1 Guest
Ahhh haahhh... that was great! I'm showing it to all my friends... =)
5/11/2002 c1 22Gevo
*smiles* True. But aren't we just looking at the surface?
3/29/2002 c1 8eonthedragontamer
can we say A S S H O L E
3/14/2002 c1 may er
hmmm... very true.. hey hey, i reviewed every one of ur works so dun say i nvr ok? i like this particular haiku though.. so when u gonna show me more?
3/2/2002 c1 42Valerie Mackin
Actually, if I'm not mistaken, you did write this correctly. I like your metaphor as well. Normally, I would agree, but I am in an exceptionally chipper mood this afternoon, so I will just say this is a very well written Haiku with an exceptional metaphor. Kudos.
2/21/2002 c1 XxHikari no YamixX
Oh so true
2/14/2002 c1 6aNGeLz3xprOtOn
even the HKP thinks u're great... what more can i say?
2/13/2002 c1 17The Haiku Police
The HKP are proud to report that you have indeed written your Haiku correctly. We salute.
2/13/2002 c1 1espeon
Great little haiku.
2/13/2002 c1 17Fairy in Black and White
Very nice haiku

It's very original

Thanks for the review

~*bad girl blondie*~
2/13/2002 c1 Ritadaze
it's alright..
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