
11/16/2001 c1 Bittersweet
Wow, cool, I love it. Keep writing
Bittersweet
Wow, cool, I love it. Keep writing
Bittersweet
6/1/2001 c1 Opal Soul who is at school and unable to log in
Very simple, but very nice. I like it. The only suggestion I have is to get rid of the comma after the second line. It detracts a little.
Very simple, but very nice. I like it. The only suggestion I have is to get rid of the comma after the second line. It detracts a little.