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5/28/2004 c1 8Heirel
Pretty good.. only thing I really have to say is that it would've been alot more powerful if it didn't pull out as long as it did. Personally would'a ended it at
now it is too
late...
but that's just me. Otherwise it ain't bad.
8/11/2003 c1 1Victoria Elizabeth
Tha twas a good poem especially for a first.
7/26/2003 c1 49recalcitrant
i felt that u had a really well written poem here so i m reviewing to tell u that. i think u have the all the makings of a really good writer. please r+r my stuff if u want. i suggest "hurt", "time" and "this one is called f* you." keep up the good writing because i would love to read more.

peace

recalcitrant
6/27/2003 c1 1abstractthinker
Really nice! Especially the part where he gets married..but not to you. Wow, there's a tightness in my chest, lol. :o)
8/22/2000 c1 3Spirit
Oh, that's so sad. That reminds me of the song I Love You by Sarah Mclachlan. Is that where you go the idea? I love that song and I love this poem!
8/21/2000 c1 3Lucky
Cute,For being it your first poem!Good job.
8/20/2000 c1 4SilentWitness
Hey that's great! I like your style of writing. This monologue is very good because it reveals a lot of emotion.
8/20/2000 c1 Katie
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