for What was poetry?2/23/2002 c1 steffie
It's me again
Yeah this poem is really great.
I really like it! Continue Writing poems Cquill (AKA:Elle/rs)
Bye Stef
It's me again
Yeah this poem is really great.
I really like it! Continue Writing poems Cquill (AKA:Elle/rs)
Bye Stef
2/23/2002 c1 Reine
*bangs head against the laptop* I could never compose something like that! How come I wasn't blessed with that incredible talent? This is a scandal! I want to sue you for-for-for making me feel . . . JEALOUS!
Anyway, I obviously loved your poem. If that did not come obviously to you then see above again. It actually rhymes too and it flows together like a lullaby. It's just so natural, you know? It doesn't seemed forced.
PAH!
*bangs head against the laptop* I could never compose something like that! How come I wasn't blessed with that incredible talent? This is a scandal! I want to sue you for-for-for making me feel . . . JEALOUS!
Anyway, I obviously loved your poem. If that did not come obviously to you then see above again. It actually rhymes too and it flows together like a lullaby. It's just so natural, you know? It doesn't seemed forced.
PAH!
2/21/2002 c1 Xavi
Elle... that was so... wow! just wow! there are now words for it! you certainly captured the essence there, loved it, yes, awesome poem. smart person, you are. smart, smart person. i bow humbly at your intelligence. ~Xavi
Elle... that was so... wow! just wow! there are now words for it! you certainly captured the essence there, loved it, yes, awesome poem. smart person, you are. smart, smart person. i bow humbly at your intelligence. ~Xavi
2/21/2002 c1 Snowlily Yup Me AGAIN
*is reviewing again because she loves this poem SO much and wants to show Elle that it's amazing and wonderful*
My favorite part was:
Was it the rising sun
Like a ball of fire?
Was it consequences
Dark and dire?
Or:
Was it the rivers
Streaming down hills?
Was it the night wind
Giving out chills?
I just LOVED the whole thing!
*is reviewing again because she loves this poem SO much and wants to show Elle that it's amazing and wonderful*
My favorite part was:
Was it the rising sun
Like a ball of fire?
Was it consequences
Dark and dire?
Or:
Was it the rivers
Streaming down hills?
Was it the night wind
Giving out chills?
I just LOVED the whole thing!
2/21/2002 c1 Snowlily Lilers
ELLERS! You already know that I absolutely love this poem, but I'll say it again! It's FANTASTIC, FABULOUS, AMAZING, WONDERFUL, ENCHANTING, MAGICAL, and SO much more! I LOVED it! Right now, I'm trying to download the Harry Potter movie onto my computer... It's going to take like 70 hours! *sigh* I'll just have to wait! Hehe.
Love you tons,
~Lily
ELLERS! You already know that I absolutely love this poem, but I'll say it again! It's FANTASTIC, FABULOUS, AMAZING, WONDERFUL, ENCHANTING, MAGICAL, and SO much more! I LOVED it! Right now, I'm trying to download the Harry Potter movie onto my computer... It's going to take like 70 hours! *sigh* I'll just have to wait! Hehe.
Love you tons,
~Lily
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