for Fantasy Collection11/15/2003 c2 lux perpetua
i think your unicorn haiku is best. I really liked the golden horn added at the end - at first, when I didn't glance too carefully at the title, I thought it might be referring to some ancient Egyptian deity. That might be an interesting thing to explore - a haiku to Isis, perhaps?
i'm just wondering - could you take a look at my story, Chancery Court? There's a classical element in there that I think you'll enjoy. It takes place in Victorian England, and is a bit of a literary thriller, an old-style romance (not mushy stuff, more like romances were in the middle ages, with all sorts of wonder and fantastical elements). I have one character - A Latin schoolmistress - and I've been trying to bring out the classics connection there. do you have any suggestions for that?
thanks!
rv kingsbury
i think your unicorn haiku is best. I really liked the golden horn added at the end - at first, when I didn't glance too carefully at the title, I thought it might be referring to some ancient Egyptian deity. That might be an interesting thing to explore - a haiku to Isis, perhaps?
i'm just wondering - could you take a look at my story, Chancery Court? There's a classical element in there that I think you'll enjoy. It takes place in Victorian England, and is a bit of a literary thriller, an old-style romance (not mushy stuff, more like romances were in the middle ages, with all sorts of wonder and fantastical elements). I have one character - A Latin schoolmistress - and I've been trying to bring out the classics connection there. do you have any suggestions for that?
thanks!
rv kingsbury
7/21/2002 c3 
4fael tinu
Pritty good, maybe next time you could use prittyer words to desribe what you'r feeling but, besides that I liked it. Please check out my fantasy poems! God bless- *fael tinu*
4fael tinuPritty good, maybe next time you could use prittyer words to desribe what you'r feeling but, besides that I liked it. Please check out my fantasy poems! God bless- *fael tinu*
2/23/2002 c3 22Gevo
? I don't get this one. I think only you can fully understand it, and that's okay.
22Gevo? I don't get this one. I think only you can fully understand it, and that's okay.
2/23/2002 c2 Gevo
This is really good! I love unicorns, and I think you described them very well. Wish they were real...
This is really good! I love unicorns, and I think you described them very well. Wish they were real...
2/22/2002 c1 48Daughter of the Nile
I don't know if maybe I am the only one who can see it for some strange reason; but there is a second and third chapter too.
Chapter 1- Dreams
Chapter 2- Unicorn
Chapter 3- Cloud Castle.
Please review these too.
~Daughter of the Nile~
48Daughter of the NileI don't know if maybe I am the only one who can see it for some strange reason; but there is a second and third chapter too.
Chapter 1- Dreams
Chapter 2- Unicorn
Chapter 3- Cloud Castle.
Please review these too.
~Daughter of the Nile~