for In A Box12/28/2003 c1 
5aqua-angel
Got curious so I decided to read and review this one. I'm glad I did :) this is really good and so profound. Made me really think *sniffle* I wonder what Lily will do now or where Joseph will go though... anyways great job and update The Importance of Being Honest soon! *grins* laterz, now i'm gonna stare at this story for a while until i actually really get it XD
5aqua-angelGot curious so I decided to read and review this one. I'm glad I did :) this is really good and so profound. Made me really think *sniffle* I wonder what Lily will do now or where Joseph will go though... anyways great job and update The Importance of Being Honest soon! *grins* laterz, now i'm gonna stare at this story for a while until i actually really get it XD
3/6/2003 c1 6LPegasus
It has a really great plot, and I enjoyed the story very much, but I have one question (and it's not about the box part, lol). You say that Ben is prejudiced against Joseph, and I was wondering, is it because of his father or is there more to it. being that you wrote it on Martin Luther King Day, does it also have something to do with his ethnic group?
Well this is a very good short story but I would go over it again because there are a few grammatical mistakes and things that you might want to look over.
P.S. You should write another short story and I want to know. does Lily ever get back with Ben?
6LPegasusIt has a really great plot, and I enjoyed the story very much, but I have one question (and it's not about the box part, lol). You say that Ben is prejudiced against Joseph, and I was wondering, is it because of his father or is there more to it. being that you wrote it on Martin Luther King Day, does it also have something to do with his ethnic group?
Well this is a very good short story but I would go over it again because there are a few grammatical mistakes and things that you might want to look over.
P.S. You should write another short story and I want to know. does Lily ever get back with Ben?
1/16/2003 c1 Naomi SilverWolf
this is really good. and i'm glad u liked my fic, Hero, the End of Seventh year. Just wanted to let you know there is a sequel up! you were my first reviewer, and i wanted to say thanks!
this is really good. and i'm glad u liked my fic, Hero, the End of Seventh year. Just wanted to let you know there is a sequel up! you were my first reviewer, and i wanted to say thanks!
5/13/2002 c1 10Lost Dove
wow. this is ...*searches for something to say*
just gimme a sec
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this is poignant and it has a wonderful mesage behind it. i really love your plot idea, and the last line is the best example of a dramatic short sentence
"I answered, 'He's moving his box.'"
You don't get any better than that.
I think you should keep writing short stories like these. You excel at them.
Good job, keep writing!
10Lost Dovewow. this is ...*searches for something to say*
just gimme a sec
...
this is poignant and it has a wonderful mesage behind it. i really love your plot idea, and the last line is the best example of a dramatic short sentence
"I answered, 'He's moving his box.'"
You don't get any better than that.
I think you should keep writing short stories like these. You excel at them.
Good job, keep writing!
4/27/2002 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
This is my favorite story by you! It's cleanly written and simple, but has a story that anyone can relate to in some form. Good job! Thanks for the reviews!
12All Mighty TerrestrialThis is my favorite story by you! It's cleanly written and simple, but has a story that anyone can relate to in some form. Good job! Thanks for the reviews!
3/7/2002 c1 195ReaDiNGS DaRK RoSe
thats great! realy great! well done you should write more stuff! Jami xxx
195ReaDiNGS DaRK RoSethats great! realy great! well done you should write more stuff! Jami xxx
2/22/2002 c1 23Zenith Azure
Interesting. I like the message. The sentence structure made it really confusing to read, though. But if you work on that a little bit, you'll have a nice story here!
23Zenith AzureInteresting. I like the message. The sentence structure made it really confusing to read, though. But if you work on that a little bit, you'll have a nice story here!