for My Hurdle2/23/2002 c1 
22Wide Awake Bored
Hmmmmmm, tis interesting, and I like the dark tone. It flows well too, and it's mysterious enough to keep the reader reading. There's one stanza that kind of left me unsastified, but other than that this was great.
-WAB
22Wide Awake BoredHmmmmmm, tis interesting, and I like the dark tone. It flows well too, and it's mysterious enough to keep the reader reading. There's one stanza that kind of left me unsastified, but other than that this was great.
-WAB