
2/25/2002 c1
66one heart in 2
Thx for the review by the by...
anywho... I like. very straight forward. I like the concrete diction it adds to the reality of the beginning. The figurative language adds to the emotions... keep posting

Thx for the review by the by...
anywho... I like. very straight forward. I like the concrete diction it adds to the reality of the beginning. The figurative language adds to the emotions... keep posting