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9/18/2004 c1 10JQ3
Whoa. This is too cool. The way you made the snake represent negative emotion was awesome.
8/11/2004 c1 18Rose Vicious
Cool use of snakes *loves the snakes* even thouh its so very very strange, I do like it. A weakness from within. Cool!
11/10/2003 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I love it. I can actually see "weakness" slithering. It is something I can relate to. It is a very visual poem. Keep writing!

~Jessika~
8/6/2003 c1 My Little Poet
very interesting, loved the imagery. well written, open for interpretation. good job! :-)
8/2/2003 c1 13avidelecteur
me likes. i got it a lot better this time when i read it as opposed to the first time.
7/8/2003 c1 13TTG
Great poem...good use of the snake in the pomem:)
7/8/2003 c1 3mustangchick
thats so true, we need to aslways stay strong in the Lord, cause the devil can be so tricky.God bless you and keep up the good work on writing!

*princess007* :o)
8/26/2002 c1 29Katterree Fengari
heh...'vacancy' lol! Sweet poem, quite nice, lovely details and whatnot

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