for A satire on suicidal tendencies I10/9/2003 c1 
10The Golden Ostrich
Okay, so this is actually for all three parts to this amusing series, but I'm too lazy to review all of them. *nergh* You can slap me if you want...
These things are fantastic...the flow could use some work, but the content is great. Angsty suicide poems get so old; it's nice to see that someone has a sense of humour regarding such a touchy topic. I know most people wouldn't venture this far thanks to political correctness.
DIE YOU POLITICALLY CORRECT BASTARDS! LEARN TO LAUGH A LITTLE! *smashes with radishes*
Sorry...I'm a little violent with my vegetables.
Anyway, props on the advancement and I hope maybe you'll write something else like this? Ja ne!
10The Golden OstrichOkay, so this is actually for all three parts to this amusing series, but I'm too lazy to review all of them. *nergh* You can slap me if you want...
These things are fantastic...the flow could use some work, but the content is great. Angsty suicide poems get so old; it's nice to see that someone has a sense of humour regarding such a touchy topic. I know most people wouldn't venture this far thanks to political correctness.
DIE YOU POLITICALLY CORRECT BASTARDS! LEARN TO LAUGH A LITTLE! *smashes with radishes*
Sorry...I'm a little violent with my vegetables.
Anyway, props on the advancement and I hope maybe you'll write something else like this? Ja ne!
9/27/2002 c1 6Tykeria
How can u put suicide in humor! While ur work is good ur topic is horrible. The only reason u could possibly find suicide funny is when ur at the edge n laugh the sick laugh of one whose lost all reason to live. U r entiled to ur opions, this is not a flame! But i do wish u'd be more serious about this subject unless u r at the point mentioned above. There r ppl who r very serious about comitting suicide, i would know, i have often thought about it. Once again this is not a flame, but a request from one stuggling to live. Plese don't make jokes about things many r going through.
6TykeriaHow can u put suicide in humor! While ur work is good ur topic is horrible. The only reason u could possibly find suicide funny is when ur at the edge n laugh the sick laugh of one whose lost all reason to live. U r entiled to ur opions, this is not a flame! But i do wish u'd be more serious about this subject unless u r at the point mentioned above. There r ppl who r very serious about comitting suicide, i would know, i have often thought about it. Once again this is not a flame, but a request from one stuggling to live. Plese don't make jokes about things many r going through.
7/15/2002 c1 lazydaisy1
how can u write about something so serious so lightly? its impossible!
krayzees stuff is well better than urs! she ROX!
how can u write about something so serious so lightly? its impossible!
krayzees stuff is well better than urs! she ROX!
6/1/2002 c1 Ossip Mandelshtam
I LOVE THIS POEM! Keep up the humor; you do it very well! Frozenflower says she loves your poem too! ROFLMGDAO! (she said using chatspeak)
I LOVE THIS POEM! Keep up the humor; you do it very well! Frozenflower says she loves your poem too! ROFLMGDAO! (she said using chatspeak)
5/24/2002 c1 CloVeR
HAHAHAHA THAT MAKES EVERYTHING SO MUCH HAPPIER!
HAHAHAHA THAT MAKES EVERYTHING SO MUCH HAPPIER!
4/11/2002 c1 2Jassy Crooks
I only read this poem because I disagreed with your summary and intended to flame the poem because of it. But that was...actually, that was really good. And I can see were you were going with it. I just wanted to say that suicide isn't funny...it may be overly frustrating to the point of amusement for someone who is close to a depressive/suicidal person. I guess that's what you are saying in the poem (?). Anyway, great work. :-)
2Jassy CrooksI only read this poem because I disagreed with your summary and intended to flame the poem because of it. But that was...actually, that was really good. And I can see were you were going with it. I just wanted to say that suicide isn't funny...it may be overly frustrating to the point of amusement for someone who is close to a depressive/suicidal person. I guess that's what you are saying in the poem (?). Anyway, great work. :-)
3/4/2002 c1 6SuiGeneris
Okay... so the rhythm could use work. But I agree whole-heartedly with the sentiment. ~glowers~ Fashionably depressed, faux-suicidal, bad-poetry-writing, fake-gothy pretentious idiots.
6SuiGenerisOkay... so the rhythm could use work. But I agree whole-heartedly with the sentiment. ~glowers~ Fashionably depressed, faux-suicidal, bad-poetry-writing, fake-gothy pretentious idiots.
2/25/2002 c1 50HOTSEXY
I love your poems. All of them! They rock. I'd love if you would come check mine out seems like you've got a REALLY great knack for humor.
- Hot Sexy
50HOTSEXYI love your poems. All of them! They rock. I'd love if you would come check mine out seems like you've got a REALLY great knack for humor.
- Hot Sexy
2/24/2002 c1 Kekadu the Goddess of Chaos
I love it! The rhyme scheme is not sharp like it is in the works of many poets, leaving it to flow smootly and be enjoyed like a nice cup of hot cocoa. Very creative.
I love it! The rhyme scheme is not sharp like it is in the works of many poets, leaving it to flow smootly and be enjoyed like a nice cup of hot cocoa. Very creative.