11/9/2003 c1 3FinallyFullfilled
good, but be careful. Don't let the words block your writing when you have something to say. Don't get so caught up in playing around with the way it sounds. It didn't ruin this poem, but just be careful.

2/24/2002 c1 9Jesi Rose
Very good! I like this very much.

Going in my faves!

-J.Rose