
11/8/2003 c1
5Lone Draco
Touching and meaningful. Alittle more detail wouldn't have hurt, but the emotion was strong and the message was powerful. Good job.

Touching and meaningful. Alittle more detail wouldn't have hurt, but the emotion was strong and the message was powerful. Good job.
5/30/2002 c1 isis
gee, i wonder who this is about... spelling errors, but good stro, it could u more emotion thought.
gee, i wonder who this is about... spelling errors, but good stro, it could u more emotion thought.