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3/28/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
I can hear the stars crying out that this is a really good haiku! Nice work!
9/4/2008 c1 58Erlkoenigin
I can hear them and the melody of the stars
5/3/2006 c1 593Morwain
that was really pretty too I like
4/30/2006 c1 65Aquafied
magical

i love how you can capture something so amazing, in such a short clip

harder to do than longer poetry.

(the word war isnt quite as poetic, you knoww.)
12/11/2003 c1 70elvenstorm
Lol so simple yet brilliant :) I love its lightness well done!
11/14/2003 c1 1aleppine
This is so beautiful ... in a tiny handful of words.

*devours*

*scuttles away*
11/14/2003 c1 28frugale
Awesome! I don't think you need any constructive criticism, so I'll just sceram out loud your work is good.
11/9/2003 c1 14Eralk Fang
Wow. To pack so much in so little words is always amazing to me.
11/8/2003 c1 186Emi Amara
oh, this is so pretty! well done! elves are cool! nice poem

cya =)

-winged girl
11/8/2003 c1 agny
cute.
7/1/2003 c1 5EarendilBeloved Star
wow.

It simple,. but descriptive! I love it! It's wonderful. :)

Keep writing.

-maybe if chance comes you could check out a few of my poems/stories.

If you'd like.
6/25/2003 c1 32Lounalune
Simply beautiful. Your haikus are so striking...
6/24/2003 c1 25StarWolf
Short but sweet, if I may use the clich├ęd phrase. ^^; Keep writing!

~*StarWolf*~
5/21/2003 c1 Angelfire2
I really like this one. I can imagine them dancing around the campfire and singing to the stars...i'm sorry, i'm in a weird mood today. *Dont mind me.* Besides, i love elves too...everybody says i look like one!
5/7/2003 c1 13just like me
I'm so jelous of good you can write!
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