for And so the castle crumbles...3/10/2003 c1 MelodyReiterLee
Aww. This is a great poem. I love it. ^_ ^ Keep writing!
Aww. This is a great poem. I love it. ^_ ^ Keep writing!
9/4/2002 c1 Jinx
This is incredible. I'm am in awe. I have read many things but this is amazing. It tells the reader so much about you if they look not too deep beneath the surface. The freestyle medium works like a charm in your hands.
This is incredible. I'm am in awe. I have read many things but this is amazing. It tells the reader so much about you if they look not too deep beneath the surface. The freestyle medium works like a charm in your hands.
8/29/2002 c1 Rohali
also very nice, the image of childhood fairy tales crumbling and fading is very well written
also very nice, the image of childhood fairy tales crumbling and fading is very well written
4/29/2002 c1 pryncesscrys
wow. from someone who's just recently getting into freestyle myslef that was amazing. now i have something to strive to write like. this was well written and inspiring
wow. from someone who's just recently getting into freestyle myslef that was amazing. now i have something to strive to write like. this was well written and inspiring
3/29/2002 c1 Harriet
I like the way you have laid out the story, also i like the way you have exaggerated !
I like the way you have laid out the story, also i like the way you have exaggerated !
3/14/2002 c1 Nick
incredable, i love your work
you posses such a level of unseen vocabulary
and i thought i was a gifted writer...
incredable, i love your work
you posses such a level of unseen vocabulary
and i thought i was a gifted writer...
2/28/2002 c1 
49jenprincess
I love it. It is scary growing up...but a box in never just a box until you let it be!
49jenprincessI love it. It is scary growing up...but a box in never just a box until you let it be!