8/15/2005 c5 Maho.Shojo
O! Sleeping with demons...
These are awful nice Demons! haha, this story is kinda cool, mixing japanese culture with like... north american influences and stuff..
Well, it makes an interesting read, that's for sure!
~Maho.Shojo
O! Sleeping with demons...
These are awful nice Demons! haha, this story is kinda cool, mixing japanese culture with like... north american influences and stuff..
Well, it makes an interesting read, that's for sure!
~Maho.Shojo
8/15/2005 c1 Maho.Shojo
cool! haha, this isn't as bad as you make it out to be! Have more confidence in yourself and your writing! I for one, think it's good.
cool! haha, this isn't as bad as you make it out to be! Have more confidence in yourself and your writing! I for one, think it's good.
5/15/2004 c20 Ima Made Nando Mo
^_^! I will be looking foward to the sequal.. and maybe a prequal. OMG YOU ROCK! ^_^ And I wanna be emailed of chapter updates! ! ^_^ yay!
^_^! I will be looking foward to the sequal.. and maybe a prequal. OMG YOU ROCK! ^_^ And I wanna be emailed of chapter updates! ! ^_^ yay!
5/14/2004 c9 2atrocious puppet
I like your story so much! I'm just starting to read it though. Maybe I'll review again at the end. I just wanted to ask if you had any drawings of your character? I hope you do. Or if not, I would love to try and draw some of your characters. If that's alright...Please, I hope that you could e-mail me about the drawings if it isn't too much to ask.-()
I like your story so much! I'm just starting to read it though. Maybe I'll review again at the end. I just wanted to ask if you had any drawings of your character? I hope you do. Or if not, I would love to try and draw some of your characters. If that's alright...Please, I hope that you could e-mail me about the drawings if it isn't too much to ask.-()
5/13/2004 c20 4DevonnyAuriel
Omg, it's not crazy, it's good! I love this story~! A sequel would be awesome, where like, Ryne is...you kno...not dead. lol.
Omg, it's not crazy, it's good! I love this story~! A sequel would be awesome, where like, Ryne is...you kno...not dead. lol.
5/12/2004 c19 1Ri of OnYGiRRi
WAI! This is so…so…so…BEAUTIFUL! I mean—really! I could care less if my eyes hurt from all the reading, the phone bill getting higher (and the electric bill too, I guess), and if my mom is currently screeching bloody murder telling me to ‘TURN THAT WRETCHED COMPUTER OFF!’ …wait, actually, I do care about my mom screaming bloody murder, but still! WAI! I can’t believe it’s OVER! And I wasn’t there to watch it progress! (Uh…the story…) …I’m so-so-so-so-so in love! WAH! It’s such a BEAUTIFUL STORY! *sniffle* How did you get to write something like this? It’s so KAWAII! …no! Let me speak more! …
Um…it’s really cute…really, really.
So, erm, how about the sequel, ne?
WAI! This is so…so…so…BEAUTIFUL! I mean—really! I could care less if my eyes hurt from all the reading, the phone bill getting higher (and the electric bill too, I guess), and if my mom is currently screeching bloody murder telling me to ‘TURN THAT WRETCHED COMPUTER OFF!’ …wait, actually, I do care about my mom screaming bloody murder, but still! WAI! I can’t believe it’s OVER! And I wasn’t there to watch it progress! (Uh…the story…) …I’m so-so-so-so-so in love! WAH! It’s such a BEAUTIFUL STORY! *sniffle* How did you get to write something like this? It’s so KAWAII! …no! Let me speak more! …
Um…it’s really cute…really, really.
So, erm, how about the sequel, ne?
5/1/2004 c19 32Slashzilla
OHMIGOD! I'm sitting here crying while I write this reveiw. I started crying at the beginning of the chap, and couldn't stop. Gah...
This story is the best I've ever read.PLEASE write a sequel! I can't stand for Sai to be sad for too long!
OHMIGOD! I'm sitting here crying while I write this reveiw. I started crying at the beginning of the chap, and couldn't stop. Gah...
This story is the best I've ever read.PLEASE write a sequel! I can't stand for Sai to be sad for too long!
4/18/2004 c19 2GirlMaverick
Ok. I know I should have reveiwed this when I first read it, which was months ago, so I appologise. But PLEASE write that sequal you were talking about! PLEASE! I LOVE this story, and waiting is just driving me INSANE!
Ok. I know I should have reveiwed this when I first read it, which was months ago, so I appologise. But PLEASE write that sequal you were talking about! PLEASE! I LOVE this story, and waiting is just driving me INSANE!
12/26/2003 c19 1The Liddo 1
this story was very lemme find the rite words...um i should say it was exquisite ^.^
this story was very lemme find the rite words...um i should say it was exquisite ^.^
11/25/2003 c1 6Malfunctioned
Ow ... wow... I'm at a loss for words. Jeezie. ^-^ You're story was positively WONDERFUL! I hope you do a conitnuation. I could think of all types of ideas - ! Of course, it is your story, though.
Ow ... wow... I'm at a loss for words. Jeezie. ^-^ You're story was positively WONDERFUL! I hope you do a conitnuation. I could think of all types of ideas - ! Of course, it is your story, though.
11/11/2003 c1 1Exorcist
My goodness! You insult my judgement when you say that you are a "sucky" author! First, I am proud to say that I found not one grammar or spelling mistake in the whole first chapter! (I have only read the first chapter so far, but I certainly plan on continuing.) That's quite an accomplishment, and it's a rare one too, coming from me. ;) Then, you managed to keep my attention through the chapter. And you are a wonderful writer! The plot seems nice, but not totally unreal, the words flow, the main character, Ryne, isn't cheesy or Mary-Sue-ish. She seems like a real person. So great job, and I'll review again when I get past the other chapters. Toodles!
Aly
My goodness! You insult my judgement when you say that you are a "sucky" author! First, I am proud to say that I found not one grammar or spelling mistake in the whole first chapter! (I have only read the first chapter so far, but I certainly plan on continuing.) That's quite an accomplishment, and it's a rare one too, coming from me. ;) Then, you managed to keep my attention through the chapter. And you are a wonderful writer! The plot seems nice, but not totally unreal, the words flow, the main character, Ryne, isn't cheesy or Mary-Sue-ish. She seems like a real person. So great job, and I'll review again when I get past the other chapters. Toodles!
Aly