for Window Panes of Sugar7/19/2002 c13 Bawdy
Brilliant mastery of words! This is the second fairytale story that to me seems to be the best! And I've only just finished your Jack and Jill story!
Brilliant mastery of words! This is the second fairytale story that to me seems to be the best! And I've only just finished your Jack and Jill story!
7/19/2002 c13 
3shanm
i liked this one. im going to rate tho ones i read:
"Miss Muffet" 10
"Neverland" 9
"jack and jil" 8
"window panes of sugar" 9 1/2
3shanmi liked this one. im going to rate tho ones i read:
"Miss Muffet" 10
"Neverland" 9
"jack and jil" 8
"window panes of sugar" 9 1/2
7/18/2002 c13 6Ersatz Sobriquet
Boy! That was some story. Did seem like you kinda rushed it at the end, but it was still great. I loved the twist of the father's head in the oven. That was a bit creepy. And I also understood how Fiona was going to get money once he died if she set them up like that.
A bit confusing how it was that they were at that witch's house that long, weeks on weeks and by time they get back to Fiona she's finally about to leave. But, oh well. It was great!
6Ersatz SobriquetBoy! That was some story. Did seem like you kinda rushed it at the end, but it was still great. I loved the twist of the father's head in the oven. That was a bit creepy. And I also understood how Fiona was going to get money once he died if she set them up like that.
A bit confusing how it was that they were at that witch's house that long, weeks on weeks and by time they get back to Fiona she's finally about to leave. But, oh well. It was great!
7/17/2002 c7 Ersatz Sobriquet
Lani, Lani, Lani. Dag, girl, you change your name and your stories become all dark and sinister! Very good so far. Wanted to only read one chapter and look where I am now! Good story telling, girl. Good story telling.
Lani, Lani, Lani. Dag, girl, you change your name and your stories become all dark and sinister! Very good so far. Wanted to only read one chapter and look where I am now! Good story telling, girl. Good story telling.
5/26/2002 c12 25Beltane
ooooooooo, good ending. This story was awesome! I love how you write these... You are, like, the new age Grimm. Very cool. See if you can get them published somewhere. You have the tallent. Or you could come up with your own freaky fairy tale. Eiether way, you're sure to do great.
25Beltaneooooooooo, good ending. This story was awesome! I love how you write these... You are, like, the new age Grimm. Very cool. See if you can get them published somewhere. You have the tallent. Or you could come up with your own freaky fairy tale. Eiether way, you're sure to do great.
5/26/2002 c11 Beltane
The first thing I thought was, "Damn, thats some stong ass sugar:" :-D The descriptions in this chapter were just magnificent(sp?) and my hat goes off to you for it. Good job. Its so sad... Next chapter is gonna be the last one... *cries*
The first thing I thought was, "Damn, thats some stong ass sugar:" :-D The descriptions in this chapter were just magnificent(sp?) and my hat goes off to you for it. Good job. Its so sad... Next chapter is gonna be the last one... *cries*
5/26/2002 c9 Beltane
Ewwwwwwww, was that honestly her father? If it is, than the witch could've been the one to knock Hansel with the ax. I have to wonder if she has something to do with their step mother. I didn't understand why she had wanted to get rid of their father, but this would've been the perfect oppurtinity, right? Good chapter, got me thinking. In case you didn't notice. :-D
Ewwwwwwww, was that honestly her father? If it is, than the witch could've been the one to knock Hansel with the ax. I have to wonder if she has something to do with their step mother. I didn't understand why she had wanted to get rid of their father, but this would've been the perfect oppurtinity, right? Good chapter, got me thinking. In case you didn't notice. :-D
5/26/2002 c8 Beltane
I noticed she wouldn't eat anything. Theres got to be something about that... Very good chapter. Leaves me wondering...
I noticed she wouldn't eat anything. Theres got to be something about that... Very good chapter. Leaves me wondering...
5/26/2002 c7 Beltane
Hey, hey, I love all of your stories, that I've read, I haven't read 'em all yet though... So far, my favorite is Jack and Jill and Little Miss Muffit... I think... I like your stories where you mess around with the rhyme. Those are cool. But, like I said. All of them are great!
Anyway, I really liked this chapter! But you cut us off with the whole "lust" emotion. I wanted more! hehe... Muy buen. :-D
Hey, hey, I love all of your stories, that I've read, I haven't read 'em all yet though... So far, my favorite is Jack and Jill and Little Miss Muffit... I think... I like your stories where you mess around with the rhyme. Those are cool. But, like I said. All of them are great!
Anyway, I really liked this chapter! But you cut us off with the whole "lust" emotion. I wanted more! hehe... Muy buen. :-D
5/26/2002 c6 Beltane
I really liked this chapter. I could feel Gretel's frustration, fear, and stress. I was beginning to wonder where Hansel was. But now I'm wondering, who hit Hansel? I don't believe his father would strike his own "son", even if he thought he was going to run away. But if Fiona hit him, it would've been in plain sight of their father.So, enough with my babbling, next chapter awaits!
I really liked this chapter. I could feel Gretel's frustration, fear, and stress. I was beginning to wonder where Hansel was. But now I'm wondering, who hit Hansel? I don't believe his father would strike his own "son", even if he thought he was going to run away. But if Fiona hit him, it would've been in plain sight of their father.So, enough with my babbling, next chapter awaits!
5/26/2002 c4 Beltane
All respect is gone.
This chapter was short, but it has enough... decision making? going on that it works well. Good job.
All respect is gone.
This chapter was short, but it has enough... decision making? going on that it works well. Good job.
5/26/2002 c3 Beltane
That woman is scary. Please don't tell me he beleves her. If he does, I'll loose all respect I ever had for him. Good job!
That woman is scary. Please don't tell me he beleves her. If he does, I'll loose all respect I ever had for him. Good job!
5/26/2002 c2 Beltane
*tisk tisk* Going after her step son like that. Though, he isn't his father's son, I've figured that out already, so it _technically_ wouldn't be wrong... But still...
*tisk tisk* Going after her step son like that. Though, he isn't his father's son, I've figured that out already, so it _technically_ wouldn't be wrong... But still...
5/26/2002 c1 Beltane
Hansel isn't really his son, is he? O well, moving on... very good so far. Must continue reading
Hansel isn't really his son, is he? O well, moving on... very good so far. Must continue reading