for Window Panes of Sugar4/30/2002 c7 
8jack's wasted life
hmm... well this chapter was once again fabulous!
okay so here are my rating:
jack and jill- 10! i loved it. it was really well written and the idea was fantastic.
little miss muffet- 5 it's sort of in between good and bad. it's really short. the idea was good and the writing was good but there wasn't much to it.
window panes of sugar- 7 i'm really getting into it but i can't tell you exactly how i feel about it until i've read all of it.
i haven't read your other stories, and i feel bad about it but when i was little 'alice in wonderland' scared me. badly. i guess i haven't gotten over it... and i just haven't gotten around to reading 'never never land'. i don't really have a desire to either... i might give it a look.
*_* i have to go now. but i hope this in some way helps you... *doubts it will*
8jack's wasted lifehmm... well this chapter was once again fabulous!
okay so here are my rating:
jack and jill- 10! i loved it. it was really well written and the idea was fantastic.
little miss muffet- 5 it's sort of in between good and bad. it's really short. the idea was good and the writing was good but there wasn't much to it.
window panes of sugar- 7 i'm really getting into it but i can't tell you exactly how i feel about it until i've read all of it.
i haven't read your other stories, and i feel bad about it but when i was little 'alice in wonderland' scared me. badly. i guess i haven't gotten over it... and i just haven't gotten around to reading 'never never land'. i don't really have a desire to either... i might give it a look.
*_* i have to go now. but i hope this in some way helps you... *doubts it will*
4/30/2002 c7 5Kimberly Michelle
I have only read this one, Jack and Jill and they are really quite good. But all in all, so far I think I like Jack and Jill the best but, please keep writing this one! I still am hooked...
5Kimberly MichelleI have only read this one, Jack and Jill and they are really quite good. But all in all, so far I think I like Jack and Jill the best but, please keep writing this one! I still am hooked...
4/30/2002 c7 Jami i think i have 2 thing on FF.Net oh well you'll figure it out
Ok.
Jack & Jill- 10
Window Panes of Sugar- 10
Little Miss Muppet- 7
Behind Sanity-9.5
That's all I read so far of your writings, but that's how I rate them. I really LOVE Jack & Jill and Window Panes of Sugar. They're my favorites.
Ok.
Jack & Jill- 10
Window Panes of Sugar- 10
Little Miss Muppet- 7
Behind Sanity-9.5
That's all I read so far of your writings, but that's how I rate them. I really LOVE Jack & Jill and Window Panes of Sugar. They're my favorites.
4/30/2002 c7 10Lila1
~*big fuzzy hug*~ THANK YOU! I've been really depressed lately and strangely, this has cheered me up a bit ^^
I'd have to rate Behind Sanity #1 because of the dark atmosphere, plus I like the riddles and the mystery,and the whole thing is so creepy.
Jack and Jill #2 because of the tragic romance that is so depressing and fun all at the same time.Kind of Anne Rice-ish.
Never Never land#3, because I can't picture Peter being demonic,but I like the concept of the characters being older, and it was cool when the mermaid got eaten. I never liked those mermaids anyway...hehe
Window panes #4,because Gretel is a spineless wimp.Will she evolve into a stronger character? I hope so ^^ I like that you didn't make the witch an ugly old hag. I mean, who wants to have dinner with a hag? Plus, if she was a hag, Hansel could kick her ass easily.
Miss Muffet #5, because I don't really know what to say about it now. She was kinda hoary.Maybe she deserved it. I'm starting to see the moral here ^_~
Now I'm going to read 3 blind mice. C ya!
10Lila1~*big fuzzy hug*~ THANK YOU! I've been really depressed lately and strangely, this has cheered me up a bit ^^
I'd have to rate Behind Sanity #1 because of the dark atmosphere, plus I like the riddles and the mystery,and the whole thing is so creepy.
Jack and Jill #2 because of the tragic romance that is so depressing and fun all at the same time.Kind of Anne Rice-ish.
Never Never land#3, because I can't picture Peter being demonic,but I like the concept of the characters being older, and it was cool when the mermaid got eaten. I never liked those mermaids anyway...hehe
Window panes #4,because Gretel is a spineless wimp.Will she evolve into a stronger character? I hope so ^^ I like that you didn't make the witch an ugly old hag. I mean, who wants to have dinner with a hag? Plus, if she was a hag, Hansel could kick her ass easily.
Miss Muffet #5, because I don't really know what to say about it now. She was kinda hoary.Maybe she deserved it. I'm starting to see the moral here ^_~
Now I'm going to read 3 blind mice. C ya!
4/22/2002 c6 8jack's wasted life
yay! thank you so much for this chapter! you're the bestest. *big hug*
i'm so happy she found hansel and you didn't end this with a cliffhanger. *_*
this story is really progressing well. it's really good.
hmm... maybe something really exciting can happen in the next chapter... and the ribbon thing will get resolved as will the seeing of all the gretels... hmm... think about it. *_*
8jack's wasted lifeyay! thank you so much for this chapter! you're the bestest. *big hug*
i'm so happy she found hansel and you didn't end this with a cliffhanger. *_*
this story is really progressing well. it's really good.
hmm... maybe something really exciting can happen in the next chapter... and the ribbon thing will get resolved as will the seeing of all the gretels... hmm... think about it. *_*
4/22/2002 c6 3Tiffany Kremer
Very very strange. It's coming along great, but not fast enough! hehe. I've been waiting for chapters because I loved your first one, 'Jack and Jill' and I'm beginning to love this one as well. But you're not gonna work on it for a while? *Sniffles*
Anyway, dialogue is great and descriptions are wonderful. Very strange with the ribons and very unique. I liked it. Keep it up!
3Tiffany KremerVery very strange. It's coming along great, but not fast enough! hehe. I've been waiting for chapters because I loved your first one, 'Jack and Jill' and I'm beginning to love this one as well. But you're not gonna work on it for a while? *Sniffles*
Anyway, dialogue is great and descriptions are wonderful. Very strange with the ribons and very unique. I liked it. Keep it up!
4/22/2002 c6 27Krys
Mmm...all I can think to say is thanks! Oh and sorry to have destracted you from your goal. We've just been so hungry for more...good chapter! I can't wait to see what happens.
27KrysMmm...all I can think to say is thanks! Oh and sorry to have destracted you from your goal. We've just been so hungry for more...good chapter! I can't wait to see what happens.
4/21/2002 c6 Moomba
Very awesome story. Keep on writing.
Very awesome story. Keep on writing.
4/21/2002 c6 Starglass
Fwoosh.
^_^;;;
VERY nice...
*Sighs*
Okies, I'm back on the whole fairytale obsession thing... gawd, my obsessions are strange... *ahem* This rocks ^_~;;;
-TLD aka Neverhere
Fwoosh.
^_^;;;
VERY nice...
*Sighs*
Okies, I'm back on the whole fairytale obsession thing... gawd, my obsessions are strange... *ahem* This rocks ^_~;;;
-TLD aka Neverhere
4/21/2002 c6 10Lila1
Woo! My computer finally updated! I can't wait to find out what happens. Thank you for posting more, even though you said you wouldn't!
10Lila1Woo! My computer finally updated! I can't wait to find out what happens. Thank you for posting more, even though you said you wouldn't!
4/4/2002 c5 3SailorHeavymetalPapillion
I like this story! I gathered from reading this that you have others, I have to find those. But I love the way this is going. You put a nice twist on hansel's past! And I would love to be on your mailing list, if you still have one!
3SailorHeavymetalPapillionI like this story! I gathered from reading this that you have others, I have to find those. But I love the way this is going. You put a nice twist on hansel's past! And I would love to be on your mailing list, if you still have one!
4/1/2002 c5 No Name
I can't wait for another chapter. Please post a new one soon.
I can't wait for another chapter. Please post a new one soon.
4/1/2002 c5 Holloweyes
Are you goin to do the real original grimms brothers story with the rose and the wand and hansel turning into a deer? Just Curious.
Love the suspence, keep up the good work lani!
- Hollow
Are you goin to do the real original grimms brothers story with the rose and the wand and hansel turning into a deer? Just Curious.
Love the suspence, keep up the good work lani!
- Hollow