for The Boy and his Sword11/11/2005 c5 
5Mad Asher
AWESOME! HOLY HELL, WOW GOOD DESCRIPTIONS. Sorry, I can't read more right now cuz I have to go, but I promise i'll continue your story.
-X-Eragon-X
5Mad AsherAWESOME! HOLY HELL, WOW GOOD DESCRIPTIONS. Sorry, I can't read more right now cuz I have to go, but I promise i'll continue your story.
-X-Eragon-X
1/26/2005 c2 7Samurai Jade
That was so awesome! I loved your description! It was very vivid. Also, you have great character development, plot development, and your setting is also well done! I love how much of your world you created, it makes it even more engaging. I also move the feel of the story, its kind of like a cross between Lodoss and Mononoke!
7Samurai JadeThat was so awesome! I loved your description! It was very vivid. Also, you have great character development, plot development, and your setting is also well done! I love how much of your world you created, it makes it even more engaging. I also move the feel of the story, its kind of like a cross between Lodoss and Mononoke!
1/24/2005 c1 Samurai Jade
Wow! That was a really good introduction! It really sets the mood! I also liked the names of everything that you have here. I also noticed that you named the Nine Constellations after letters in the Greek Alphabet-I'm learning Greek, as I am half Greek. Although, 'Upsilon' is spelled 'Ipsilon'. I really like it so far, it's very original and creative. ^_^
Wow! That was a really good introduction! It really sets the mood! I also liked the names of everything that you have here. I also noticed that you named the Nine Constellations after letters in the Greek Alphabet-I'm learning Greek, as I am half Greek. Although, 'Upsilon' is spelled 'Ipsilon'. I really like it so far, it's very original and creative. ^_^
1/12/2004 c2 6Jimi Lennon
hey hey! i am seriously liking the intricacy of this story! wonderfully imaginitive! it has a very fantastical feel to it. i'm going to stop before i start gushing anymore!
Have a good day!
Jimi
6Jimi Lennonhey hey! i am seriously liking the intricacy of this story! wonderfully imaginitive! it has a very fantastical feel to it. i'm going to stop before i start gushing anymore!
Have a good day!
Jimi
8/9/2003 c1 8Kezkay
Oh. My. Gawsh. *stares dumbstruck at the work of a phenominal author* Excuse me while I go have a conniption... I have had you on my favorites list for MONTHS, and now, just as I get ready to leave for two weeks, I finally stop by and read *kicks self*! The legend was great, superb, beyond belief... *insert a fit of (*&%(&(%-ing insults at my intelligence here* I'm, uh...gonna go, and um, get everyone I know to read this, 'mkay? Expect a real review when I get back, -Kez
8KezkayOh. My. Gawsh. *stares dumbstruck at the work of a phenominal author* Excuse me while I go have a conniption... I have had you on my favorites list for MONTHS, and now, just as I get ready to leave for two weeks, I finally stop by and read *kicks self*! The legend was great, superb, beyond belief... *insert a fit of (*&%(&(%-ing insults at my intelligence here* I'm, uh...gonna go, and um, get everyone I know to read this, 'mkay? Expect a real review when I get back, -Kez
6/2/2003 c38 10Pyro Freak
This is a wonderful story that you wrote! I'm glad that there's a second part to it, because I thought this one was kind of short with small chapters. Keep writing!
10Pyro FreakThis is a wonderful story that you wrote! I'm glad that there's a second part to it, because I thought this one was kind of short with small chapters. Keep writing!
5/7/2003 c4 Randy
Ahh... are you Japanese? cuz Oni is a jap. word... i've been watching to many anime. GREAT story! I love it.
Ahh... are you Japanese? cuz Oni is a jap. word... i've been watching to many anime. GREAT story! I love it.
1/20/2003 c38 1Frog Lord
Wow. That's all that I have to say. It was truley awsome. The character developement, the incredible fights, the setting descriptions, the list goes on and on and on. Truley a story I shall never forget.
But, like a good critique, I must say one thing that I found a little disconcerning throughout the story. You really don't like your characters, eh? I don't mean to be mean, but in the middle of sections, you made fun of your characters randomly, (and at the end of chapters, for that matter.) and, quite frankly, you shouldn't. Remember - the people reading your shtuff may not find it good for a writer to complain about their own characters in the middle of deep passages. Ok?
I'm sorry if that killed you, but that's the ONLY thing I didn't like. Other than that, the story was spectacular. If there was a rating system for stories, yours would get a 15 out of 10. Seriously! It's that good.
KEEP ON WRITING!
Cait Sith59
1Frog LordWow. That's all that I have to say. It was truley awsome. The character developement, the incredible fights, the setting descriptions, the list goes on and on and on. Truley a story I shall never forget.
But, like a good critique, I must say one thing that I found a little disconcerning throughout the story. You really don't like your characters, eh? I don't mean to be mean, but in the middle of sections, you made fun of your characters randomly, (and at the end of chapters, for that matter.) and, quite frankly, you shouldn't. Remember - the people reading your shtuff may not find it good for a writer to complain about their own characters in the middle of deep passages. Ok?
I'm sorry if that killed you, but that's the ONLY thing I didn't like. Other than that, the story was spectacular. If there was a rating system for stories, yours would get a 15 out of 10. Seriously! It's that good.
KEEP ON WRITING!
Cait Sith59
1/5/2003 c1 Hero-of-time4000
I think you should make a third one ! and fourth ! maybe fith! you should get this published!
I think you should make a third one ! and fourth ! maybe fith! you should get this published!
9/28/2002 c38 Leena
I LOVE this story! It's all very original and extrememly cool! Keep writing and I'll definitely keep reading!
I LOVE this story! It's all very original and extrememly cool! Keep writing and I'll definitely keep reading!
8/24/2002 c41 Thomas Falcon
WOW! That was awesome! It took me forever to read, but it was definitely worth it. I like the way that you set up your magic, that's really cool. Also, your prophecies and spells aren't hokey ^-^ Wait...if it wasn't Lotus who lead them back, who was it? Columbine? How did Eruune die? That was a little fast. I can't wait to start part II. Hope it's just as good!
WOW! That was awesome! It took me forever to read, but it was definitely worth it. I like the way that you set up your magic, that's really cool. Also, your prophecies and spells aren't hokey ^-^ Wait...if it wasn't Lotus who lead them back, who was it? Columbine? How did Eruune die? That was a little fast. I can't wait to start part II. Hope it's just as good!
8/18/2002 c1 Triforce
This reminds me vaguely of Ocarina of Time, especially w/ the temples and everything. It's like anime, too, I mean, like, a LOT like an anime. Good writing.
This reminds me vaguely of Ocarina of Time, especially w/ the temples and everything. It's like anime, too, I mean, like, a LOT like an anime. Good writing.
8/17/2002 c1 DragonWings2
Ok, i just started reading ur story, and i kno u finished it already, but i still wanna post a review anyway.
I like ur story...cant wait 2 c what happens next except that i hav 2 go offline :( i will b sure 2 keep reading it!
2 questions though:
1. is the region sorta like Asia? cuz the food sounds asian ;)
2. y r the 7 creatures that guard the goddesses that guard the realms named after greek letters?
u dun hav 2 answer, and i repeat again: cant wait till 2moro morning 2 read ur next chapter!
Ok, i just started reading ur story, and i kno u finished it already, but i still wanna post a review anyway.
I like ur story...cant wait 2 c what happens next except that i hav 2 go offline :( i will b sure 2 keep reading it!
2 questions though:
1. is the region sorta like Asia? cuz the food sounds asian ;)
2. y r the 7 creatures that guard the goddesses that guard the realms named after greek letters?
u dun hav 2 answer, and i repeat again: cant wait till 2moro morning 2 read ur next chapter!
8/17/2002 c41 1HyperFalcon
The only reason I didn't read this through in one night is beacuse the site started glitching... or was it my comp? I finished it this morning. This story is just amazing, the way it flows together so well. I've also read through what you've posted of part II and I'm definitely seeing more of the same in the future.
*Looks at his story and then looks at this story*
Maybe I should actually plan mine before I write it...
1HyperFalconThe only reason I didn't read this through in one night is beacuse the site started glitching... or was it my comp? I finished it this morning. This story is just amazing, the way it flows together so well. I've also read through what you've posted of part II and I'm definitely seeing more of the same in the future.
*Looks at his story and then looks at this story*
Maybe I should actually plan mine before I write it...
8/16/2002 c41 8Cinnabar Scarlett
(author's note): Did that Magic Theory thing actually make sense...? I hope it did (that was some time ago, though)... ^-^ Yeah. I have the revised and edited version of this story at home, and this on ff.net is different, so there are some things that I just have to outright explain in little chapters like that... so I don't have to re-write the chapters. (I'm so lazy) By the way, there are three parts to this story, for anyone who cares, and I'm almost done writing part II at home, while I only have four chapters of it on ff.net. If people read and review, I'll update ALOT, okay? ^-' Jamata!
8Cinnabar Scarlett(author's note): Did that Magic Theory thing actually make sense...? I hope it did (that was some time ago, though)... ^-^ Yeah. I have the revised and edited version of this story at home, and this on ff.net is different, so there are some things that I just have to outright explain in little chapters like that... so I don't have to re-write the chapters. (I'm so lazy) By the way, there are three parts to this story, for anyone who cares, and I'm almost done writing part II at home, while I only have four chapters of it on ff.net. If people read and review, I'll update ALOT, okay? ^-' Jamata!