
4/21/2005 c1
182SweetWithUncertainty
awesome poem, so full of life and emotion, supressed pain...awesome
A hopeless romantic,SG

awesome poem, so full of life and emotion, supressed pain...awesome
A hopeless romantic,SG
5/21/2003 c1
4Eiji
^-^ Keep it up! Oh, your works are so beautiful! That's so sad, how could he just sit and watch his brother and the woman he loves?

^-^ Keep it up! Oh, your works are so beautiful! That's so sad, how could he just sit and watch his brother and the woman he loves?
8/30/2002 c1 Guest
Wow.
Wow.
7/20/2002 c1 Satine1899
NO BACK STORY, BUT A GREAT POEM. IT MAKES ME KINDA HAVE A LOOK ON AT HOW YOUR MAIN CHARACTER FEELS...
NO BACK STORY, BUT A GREAT POEM. IT MAKES ME KINDA HAVE A LOOK ON AT HOW YOUR MAIN CHARACTER FEELS...
3/19/2002 c1 Zibbelcoot yea I know not logged in
I loved the surprise ending... and now I wish I knew how she ended up with her husband instead of her lover...
I loved the surprise ending... and now I wish I knew how she ended up with her husband instead of her lover...