for A day on the Mountain12/13/2003 c1 bc
Ah, very Moses and the Burning Bushish, if you don't mind me saying. Great description.
Ah, very Moses and the Burning Bushish, if you don't mind me saying. Great description.
3/25/2002 c1 
8BNLadie
your spine, huh? ; aww, I'm just givin' ya flak. good descriptions! the one line that sticks out to me is "On a day I that I hadn’t
Suspected anything strange"... it doesn't have the same flow as the rest of your poem. hmm, am I acting pompous? must be all this IB training *snicker*
Good job, Evan. how about some stuff you didn't submit to Harbinger? Heaven knows I wouldn't submit my BNL story... *chuckles at that thought*
-la Femme. Devine qui, sot. ;
8BNLadieyour spine, huh? ; aww, I'm just givin' ya flak. good descriptions! the one line that sticks out to me is "On a day I that I hadn’t
Suspected anything strange"... it doesn't have the same flow as the rest of your poem. hmm, am I acting pompous? must be all this IB training *snicker*
Good job, Evan. how about some stuff you didn't submit to Harbinger? Heaven knows I wouldn't submit my BNL story... *chuckles at that thought*
-la Femme. Devine qui, sot. ;
3/18/2002 c1 71Kormation
I thought this poem was pretty good. Especially the last couple of lines
"As i stood in awe
At the amazing sight
Of a fireball"
There's some great description used in this poem as well. Building up to the actual fireball was very effective in this poem too.
Very good.
Kormation
71KormationI thought this poem was pretty good. Especially the last couple of lines
"As i stood in awe
At the amazing sight
Of a fireball"
There's some great description used in this poem as well. Building up to the actual fireball was very effective in this poem too.
Very good.
Kormation