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for seventeen years

7/21/2003 c1 14Silence-endlessecho
That was so sad and beautiful. Very powerful!
5/2/2003 c1 4Chord
A coma?

... beautiful poem.

~chord
1/9/2003 c1 27werechick
Melikies.
11/16/2002 c1 252account inactive00000
ah-

i wish i had something intelligent to say. i really do
8/18/2002 c1 53Aviendha19
this poem feels like a symphony, and thats the only thing i can think of to say. i feel like crying too
8/16/2002 c1 11unexpected source
hopkins makes me want to bite my fist.

indefinately this is also exsisting,
5/9/2002 c1 17Jade6
oh so sad... but powerful... truly touching...

I love the diversity of your poems... you cover so much and don't get stuck on the same topic...

I like this poem... it hits the heart... it is so real...
4/22/2002 c1 4Spyre
Poignant as one can get.

Again, your pacing is exact,

purposeful and very drawing.

I knew it was her father

the stanza before you reveal

it... and I think that's what's

great about it.

as ever:

s p y r e

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